i like it, but i can't read the word "film" as it flies by at :04. it might not be entirely necessary to read it since you immediately pan over to a film projector, but if you did want it to be legible, you might want to smooth out the camerawork there a little. otherwise, nice job.

I have a final version where you can read it well, but I haven't post it! sorry. But here is the link it was for Current tv. current.com/items/88950352_mind_explosion