Nice work Jordan, I really like the effects you used for this one. Very smooth dolly work too; I love shots like that. I especially liked the few close-up shots done where the subject is going over the camera (1:10).

Great one!

I like it!

That was Amazing!

why can't i move like that?

awesome work.

Wow, thats amazing..

Beautifully done.

oh my god.

i could say more but. oh my god.

wow I love it! you are amazing!

This is so amazing it's sickening.

Seriously. Dude.

beautiful! what's the title of the second song?

Thanks for sharing buddy. Looking good as always.

Love the look of the lighting!

It's like you've taken imagery I've only dreamt of and made it real.

Curious,
How did you get that halo effect around your highlights? ie, what do you mean by "glow lighting", filters or post?

Love the video by the way.

Stunning - where did you get all those blossoms?
And I soo love the opening shot, "What? He's all wet?!"

As always beautiful, wonderful, heart stoping.

The petals were such a fantastic bit of art direction. along with the water. please keep this up.

Great work. Someone has been watching Fully Flared ;-)

Sweetest video ever. I want to trick with you so bad.

man thats fantastic

Hey Jordan- I work in Final Cut Pro- can you describe your workflow to create those effects? Both for the Balloon/Fishing Wire and the Human Movement vids?

Awesome!

Great, i like !

Thanks for sharing another beautiful work.
Impressed with the slow motion images.

good work!

excellent one

Just. Amazing. Its videos like this that keep vimeo.com/HD the best site ever.

I liked .It could have been shorter . And more vertical camera movement .

I liked it

Toppertje! as we say in Holland ;-)
Please tell me more about the music and the person in your movie.

I tried to copy your flips and fell...lol

i love the 1st 5 seconds especially nice!

Wow that was incredible

Can't touch this.

Hey man, overall I loved it. My only major issue with it is:

a) your fonts... is that the same font at the beginning and end? and why are the fonts different at the beginning and end? Additionally, you have it as "Human Movement in Light" at the beginning, but it's "Human Movement with Light" at the end. And there's a period after Light in the end set as well. I think it would be nice to have that consistency throughout, ie. title sequence or something.

b) Glad to see Vancouver representing :)

Otherwise, really loved it.

hahahahaha dude this video is excellent!

The Besnard Lakes song was an excellent choice by the way, and I like the sync of that song with your landing. Also, there was one petal that came really close to the camera right before that shot and it looked awesome dude haha. That kinda stuff rocks.

Take care!

great. well done. i like it

Nice! Loved it!

The camera work is spectacular!

rad!.. i like it a lot.

i like this alot not just because the angles and the amazing angles and dolly mork but also because it kinda riminds me of one of my favorite skate videos, fully flared and the music was wonderfuly played thoghout the entire thing i thought that the petals mad an amazing effect with the water too.

just keep it up and keep on making these spactacular videos

i liked this one more than the first.

I was in awe for the first 30 seconds, then it started to get old.
I personally did not like the constant switching of songs, either.

Don't let me get you down, it was still interesting.

0:58 and 1:38 are my favorite shots. Very cool effects.

very nice video Jordan, I look forward to seeing the final version. May I ask what program you used to edit/add effects to your video?

thanks and good luck

Awesome setting and good choice of songs; especially, Sigur Ros - Staralfur. Very cool.

What camera was used?

This is very well done.

Am also curious about the camera. The music was awesome too. Extremely great feelings and music i've never heard before. So intense!!

And what kicks is he wearing?! I WANT THOSE!

I love it! What camera did you shoot it with?

I'm glad you are looking for feedback. Sometimes getting critiqued is the only way to improve our craft. What Sieger said might help you out in terms of your audience and what you want to present. I have a couple of things I want to mention: First of all, the title doesn't add anything new to the piece; your description is enough. Perhaps you might want to look for another word for movement, but I would try to keep it simple. The music changes too often, especially at the beginning. The transitions from one song to the next are not smooth and as a result, distracting. The repertoire of songs carries too many moods, and the duration of each does not allow the viewer to enter a specific mood. A couple last points, the camera is a little shaky when you do dolly shots. I'm guessing you had your camera on a skateboard and someone pushed it along. You can tell that the image jumps a little. And one last thing, there is vigneting on the bottom left hand shot in some of the shots. It is less apparent when the screen is small, but when you watch the video full screen this can be quite distracting. Again, don't let this discourage you. Make new work constantly. Little by little you start improving on previous mistakes. And remember, getting critiqued is one of the best ways to improve our work. Best of luck...

really wonderful

gorgeous visuals

youre in vancouver? we should get together and shoot some stuff.

what camera are you using?

splendid mate.

Fantastic!!

Really impressive, great work !

great stuff !
you really know your onions!

Hey, I really like the music, where is it from? Thanks!

nevermind, i see in the comments above me,...i'm dumb

Wow!

Very nice job, the video was just beautiful.

Very nice job, the video is just beautiful.

Jordan,

Your human movements are pretty sweet, but how the hell do you get such silky smooth camera movements?

oh yeah...who created that music. I'm in Kelowna incidentally.

i like the glow is so cool but I want to know with which camera you record?

hvx200 =)

really good! the first song was used in Lakai fully flared the song is so good. great video!

great work dude, beautifully shot!

Siiiiick....

Someone should document that in it's second day this video is up to 3,842 plays and 195 likes.

Done!

This video is just gorgeous! Also I love Sigur Ros! And I'm going to see M83 play tonight in San Francisco! Nice choice of music, as well as technically solid, imaginative video-making. You've got a good eye.

inspirational!

This is not with the HV20 is it? 0_o

Doesn't look like it.

Oh wow! This is amazing! I love the use of water and petals!!! LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Awesome work man, I really like the glow effects. And I love the m83. I would either stick to one song the whole time, or crossfade between them better, the changing of the songs seem to bring attention to themselves, it should be a little more seamless I guess. Other than that you got a great look and awesome contrast with the hvx. What scene files did you use? 1080 or 720?

super rad man!!! that location really added to it...although i hope he got a tetnis shot afterwrds! keep it up man...i want to see human movement 3,4,5,6,7...!!!

absolutely amazing!

HI~
May I use this video for a demo to introduce Vimeo on my website?
tks!

wretch.cc/blog/ben23/13491755
and
blog.pixnet.net/ben23/post/17894958

Cut it down to ~30 seconds and I'd say you have yourself an amazing shoe commercial.

... Not to say that it isn't amazing, just merely a suggestion.

Lakai Fully Flared - Wonder if you got any inspiration from that? Sick video anyways, hope you get full marks dude!

I love it. it had that p'zaz. :]

I have to say I've never posted a comment about a video on vimeo before, this is great. I really liked Baloon, which was simple and clever and so well executed. You have real musician's ear for music for visuals, I've just discovered Pinback... There is something very special about this video's opening shot. I'm not sure what it is, but its there. Makes me want to go out and buy a HVX. Or certainly upgrade my cameras. Colour treatment is awesome. While I'd agree it could be 30secs shorter, and have the same impact, I'm also sure if sony gave you $50K to spend, you could either hit that ball right out of the park or just tag a Bravia logo on the end and pocket the loot...
Not that I want rain on the parade, but but of curiousity what's the gig with use of music around here, regarding copyright? I notice no credits, licence?