Personally, I think it's a great movie. The plot is good and there is a nice film-making work. Keep this way!! ;-)

I thought the film good. You can tell a lot of care was taken in the shooting and editing stages. The movie had a nice flow and the scene changes were well thought out. Nice work!

nice film bro really enjoyed it. im in the process right now of making a movie on bully in school,too.its a narrative one. great job tho!

shut up exte, these guys have done a lot of work for this movie and i liked it, because it holds a good message..
only thing i would do different is the ending.. it's kinda fast.. nothing builds up to the point you understand he wants to kill himself..

keep up the great work!

I have to say I am blown away! dude, you have a talent. your stengths lie in your cinematography and editing! you really maintained a cinematic feel and created that illusion of a world that alot of film makers have a hard time achieving. I would love to see what you could achieve with a dolly, jib and camer stabilizer.

Good stuff, dig the story. I have to admit I was hoping he'd take that piece back to the party and show them what's up, lol.

I liked it! You should have jumped on that bully's back when he was walking down the stairs! ;)

Concentrate on normalizing the audio and adding dynamic range compression so the volume will be the same throughout the entire piece.

You know, this is a touchy subject and a common one too. I hope other teens out there look at another way to get back at the jerks that make their life suck other than doing yourself in. It isn't you they have problems with. It is themselves. Jealous, or just trying to make themselves look cooler to bring others down? Who knows.

Good effort on your first video. Keep up the good work, look forward to seeing more.

HOLY SHIT as soon as it started to play I knew it was Elliott Smith. GREAT MUSIC CHOICE!

Wow! And you did all this under time constraints? I shutter to think what you would do with relaxed time and full gear. This is wonderful and you are quite talented.

Keep puttin' it down, young brother.

hey bro nice job. How did you get those titles? After effects?

I started watching this at work months ago, never finished. Just watched it today. Sure, there's some audio, color, and editing issues, but the film is VERY good!

I suggest that you do it again, if possible. Reshoot it and tighten it up. This could be amazing!

Congrats

What did you use to shoot this? Its high quality!

Cool!

I noticed the shirt the protagonist is wearing...are those Radiohead lyrics? I thought to myself "That looks a lot like the cover for In Rainbows!"

not bad at all man, my only comment would be spiffy up the audio, you can hear the differnt changes in levels to and from each shot, i'd say some simple dissolves of the audio tracks would fix that

great job man