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***Winning entry for Chapter 4, The Story Beyond the Still Contest***

Written & Directed by Jeff Turick
NewYorkDirectorofPhotography.com

Director's commentary with technical notes and extended beach scene here:
vimeo.com/11806174

Chapter 1: The Cabbie - vimeo.com/groups/beyondthestill/videos/8595246

Chapter 2: Job Security - vimeo.com/groups/beyondthestill/videos/9394817

Chapter 3: The Beach - vimeo.com/groups/beyondthestill/videos/10363683


CAST

Cabbie: Steven Nelson
Beachcomber: Clark Middleton
Allison: Daphne Ciccarelle
Thug 1: Solomon Shiv
Thug 2: Rory Dunwoody
Scientist: Tom Knutson
Babysitter: Kristen Turick

CREW

Director of Photography: Jeff Turick
Gaffer: Stephen Cannella
Jib Operator: Ian "The Finger" McGrew
Grip/Electric: Tom "Tommy Boy" Bartlett, Paul Carmine, Kenny Pelczar
Best Girl Electric: Kim Formisano
Makeup: Barbara Whitchurch asuitableimage.com
Production Coordinator: Stephen Stuart, Kristen Turick
Audio Engineer: Greg McKean
Production Assistant: Sara St. Leger

Original score by Jesse Solomon Clark jessesolomonclark.com

Some equipment provided by:
Dan Welch NewYorkVideoCrews.com
Chris Anderson nevessaproduction.com

Special thanks: Sarah Haas, Nicoelle Cohen, Ralph Umhoefer, Anne Carson, Kirk Nehring, Pablo Riera

Additional voice talent, Prisoners: Ana Alexandria Knight, Cheryl Pickett, Arthur Harold

Shot on a Canon 5D Mark II with Canon f/2.8 EF lenses: 16-35mm, 24-70mm, 70-200mm, and 100mm macro.

Credits

Likes

  • Charles Frisby 1 year ago
    I like it. Top 5 for sure.
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  • Joel Gautraud 1 year ago
    Best looking entry I've seen so far. Very nice camera work.
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  • Fiore Films plus 1 year ago
    Awesome! Crazy 'bout the creepy coloring!
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  • Joel Gautraud 1 year ago
    May I ask what kinds of camera stabilization/sliders/dollys/jibs/cranes were used in this production?

    You have my vote.
  • Jeff Turick 1 year ago
    Hi Joel, Thank you very much for the compliments. We really didn't use much on this in the way of stabilization. Virtually everything up until the Scientist was handheld. I wanted all the footage with the cabbie to have a more immediate feel, like we're experiencing these events with him not just as an observer. I have a mix of RedRock & Zacuto gear for shoulder mounting the camera etc, that I bought when i first got the camera, but I rarely if ever use them. What I've found I really enjoy about this camera a lot is the intimacy it offers. There's something very different about holding a DSLR close to the body, rather than being encumbered by a large shoulder-mounted rig.

    There was one dolly shot we did in his family room (looking from another room) and that was done with an inexpensive skateboard dolly that I picked up from PaintedSheepDolly.com last year.

    We were going to do a couple Steadicam shot on the beach, but had major probs there that I'll talk about on my blog, and i still plan on doing a commentary with the film.

    Finally, the opening shot and all the scientist footage was shot from an 18' Jimmy Jib. My friend and colleague, Ian McGrew operated the jib on those and did an amazing job. The one shot at 3:15 is particularly impressive for what he did. The shot begins with him jibbing down, while dollying back (mind you, there was no track and no dolly grip, just the three fat jib wheels). As the camera reaches the corner of the table, it booms left, at which point Ian has to reverse his dolly direction and start pushing forward so he can get the boom over to the trunk, all while keeping track of pan/tilt and keeping it all fluid. I love it.
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  • Ryan Neil Postas plus 1 year ago
    I figured this would be the one, if any, I'd lose to..looks like I was way off. You got my vote for Cinematography alone
  • Jeff Turick 1 year ago
    Thanks Ryan. I really appreciate that. And I rather enjoyed Unit 645 too. Some very cool shots in there.
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  • jonathan kaiser 1 year ago
    I agree with the others. Cinematography in this one was real strong. I'd also like to know about the stabilization/sliders/dollys/jibs/cranes as Joel has previously asked. Well done, you have my vote.
  • Jeff Turick 1 year ago
    thanks jonathan. I responded to Joel's comment which answered the question; please see that for info about camera support.
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  • Joel Gautraud 1 year ago
    Jeff,
    Thanks for the in-depth response and it was that very shot at 3:15 that prompted me to ask the question. I really love it... and not just the moves; the lighting and grading are looking great as well.
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  • VTK Productions 1 year ago
    Wow... and that last location is awesome. All elements string together!
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  • Emrys Roberts plus 1 year ago
    Your lighting job in this piece was awesome. Some really kickass setups. Just read your comment about the jib move too. Props to your operator on that one. :)
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  • Matt Draper plus 1 year ago
    Congrats on being selected. Best of luck to you! I agree with the others, some beautiful shots.
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  • Servet Dean Sari 1 year ago
    I really liked it. You 've got my vote;)
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  • CO Arsenal 1 year ago
    BY FAR the best of the top 5. You got my vote! Seriously, not even close. Everything about it was excellent. Great camera work (even better knowing you did most of it handheld) and lighting, excellent acting, a believable plot and an excellent script. If you don't win it's will be a huge travesty!
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  • Chuck Ibey plus 1 year ago
    After watching the others, you got my vote hands-down. It was shot beautifully, with some great moves and lighting. Color was spot-on, great audio work, but what really made my vote was the script. This chapter is easily the strongest of the 5 finalists. Way to go!
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  • Hanamichi 1 year ago
    So no one have a problem with the cab driver not caring about his dead wife?
  • Saddas 1 year ago
    For real? They already said, and I thinkk told you, it was the baby sitter.

    There were bigger probs with the story in this, as it didn't fit into the previous chapter, but still, how many voters are watching the otehr chapters and looking for those kind of details. This film looks amazing and it has real actors! That one guy was in FRINGE!!!! My fav!
  • Yeah, but, imo, the acting on this one was fairly bad, especially with the cabbie. It was completely unrealistic as to reactions. He was WAY too calm and uncaring and non-emotional with the broken door and trashed house, the dead babysitter, his little girl missing, and then leaving going to get her at the beach. It basically ruined the film for me, and I don't think it should have one just for that alone. But, after Top 5, it's mostly a popularity contest, so, that's what happens. It did have some other nice shots here and there. And I think the final photo still was very weak. (most of them were for Ch. 4) As contests go, this one is way too "random". And you better have some jib shots and other shots like that, or you don't stand a chance. And you are also probably pre-screwed if you don't shoot your film with a DSLR. I doubt if a "perfect" film could win a chapter contest (or Top 5) if it wasn't shot with a DSLR and at least one jib shot. (+/-) And the other Top 5 films had a lot of issues, as well, but maybe they were still Top 5.
  • Jeff Turick 1 year ago
    Hanamichi, dude... as Saddas pointed out, this concern of yours was answered when you posted the first time. ;)

    Popper, I take complete responsibility for the Cabbie's reactions in the house. It was purely a directorial decision. In delving into the other episodes and observing the Cabbie, I found him to be rather stoic. In the backstory I considered for the character, I imagined him as having had some rather severe anger issues in the past. Those issues forced his wife to leave him and she ended up dying on the very day she left, leaving Cabbie alone with his daughter, and alone with a heavy burden of guilt that helped him to change.

    The Cabbie, imo, doesn't deal with "what-ifs." "Why" people do things doesn't matter to him. Just how those things affect him. He's a matter-of-fact man who does what he needs to do to get by. So yes... when he arrives at home and notices the door smashed open, his only thought at that point is Allison. Is she safe? But he's also not an idiot. He's smart enough not to just charge into the house for her, knowing that the perpetrators may still be in there.

    I could have taken the obvious route and had him freaking out about the babysitter, or rushing through the house a la Bourne Identity (which was my first thought), but once I start thinking about characters and people and what makes them respond to situations the way they do -- often in ways that surprise me -- that's when the obvious choices begin to dissipate, and where the more intriguing choices, I think, can be discovered. I'm sorry you didn't like my choice, but that's one of the aspects of filmmaking no one can do anything about: it's impossible to please everyone.
  • Jonathan Entwistle plus 1 year ago
    That's all well and good, but non of that is dramatised... how are we supposed to know it's the baby-sitter?

    You cannot dramatise 'nothing' - If his reaction is to be a calm one, and thus unusual and abnormal to the way we expect him to react then the audience has to see an element of the abnormality dramatised - it's not enough for you to say it in Vimeo comments - you have to say it in the film.

    Basic directing is story first through actors and THEN comes the cinematography - it can look incredible, but bad acting turns audiences away - unless your audience is full of cinematographers.....
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  • Jonathan Lacocque plus 1 year ago
    Congrats! A magnificently shot film. Really well done.
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  • JMJProductions plus 1 year ago
    Amazing what you can do with that camera and some ingenuity. Great work!!!!!!!
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  • Andrew Donoho plus 1 year ago
    best of the four
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  • finn savoy 1 year ago
    Congrats on the win. And now the big question - how much did you spend?
  • Jeff Turick 1 year ago
    Thanks Finn. I spent somewhere around $1500 - $2000. I still haven't really tallied up all the receipts. $450 for the warehouse space. Another $500 for some additional gear (wireless follow focus, a 16-35mm lens, and some other little things), and then a bunch of money for food and transpo, plus a rented space for our casting session, props, wardrboe. Everything else -- lighting, jib, camera, etc -- I either own or we borrowed from friends and colleagues.
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  • Chris Kent 1 year ago
    great job, man. congratulations.
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  • CoasterGeek101 plus 1 year ago
    That was very good!
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  • Daniel Adams 1 year ago
    The acting seamed a lttle empty. Awesome camera work but the actors can do better
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  • Justin Leyba 1 year ago
    Congratulations guys! You deserve it.
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  • Lewis Fraga 1 year ago
    Congrats man - you had my vote - awesome camerawork and lighting!
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  • Daniel Behrens 1 year ago
    This is why the DP should never direct at the same time :) GREAT cinematography, but the acting was pretty awful.
  • Jeff Turick 1 year ago
    aw come on man. totally cool if you didn't like the acting, but 'awful'? ;)

    thanks for the kudos on the cinematography tho!
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  • Nicholas M. Lee 1 year ago
    that looked freaking great.
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  • Oxygen Visuals 1 year ago
    I am happy .... Congratulation!
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  • Uptown Magazine 1 year ago
    I am blown away. Wow f"ing awesome.. Good lord, just seriously blown away. Fantastic short.
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  • Adrian Langford 1 year ago
    Congrats Jeff & Team. Oh I so want to say 'I told you this would win!' hehe. Well done, very well deserved and against very good competition. I think the dog swung it Jeff. (And I'm not joking... in the sense that it's the little touches and attention to detail that all add up to make a difference to the perception of the whole piece.)

    Enjoyed watching the commentary too. Very interesting.

    Regards,

    Adrian.
  • Jeff Turick 1 year ago
    Thanks Adrian. And thanks for noticing those little touches. It makes the hours I annoyed my wife by making her listen to different mixes and talking her ear off about tiny details all the more worthwhile. :)
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  • Anthony Johnson 1 year ago
    congrats on winning .. but this 'whole ' film is getting pretty boring now .. i thought vincent wanted the film to take different turns like "The trunk could be a small trunk in a fish bowl...pull out... and reveal an entirely differrent world." .. but it seems its just gone in one direction ,,. a boring one .. whats happening with the judges ??? ... sure this looks amazing, but cant we start getting creative ?? anyone else agree ???
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  • Rhea 1 year ago
    Great work. Obviously you are a pro... Again great work!
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  • Thomas & Sarah plus 1 year ago
    Jeff,

    first class !
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  • man, you've just gone and made something that in essence is what I love in film, mystery with an almost noir feel to it, and some espionage styling to boot.

    Well done, hugely inspirational. LIKED!
  • Jeff Turick 1 year ago
    Wow, thanks Ryan. I'm glad you enjoyed it so much! :)
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  • Greg V 1 year ago
    Fantastic and skillful ! You're certainly not the "Xmas Help" are you :)
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  • Brett Edwards 1 year ago
    Great piece of work. The shot at 3:15 definitely caught my attention as well I thought it was great, and now knowing what you worked with makes it that much better. Keep up the good work!!!
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  • Ryan Rakowski 1 year ago
    Amazing Work. Truly inspirational!
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  • Jeff Turick 1 year ago
    Thanks for all these compliments, everyone. I'm really glad you've all enjoyed it so much.
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  • bob lorrimer plus 1 year ago
    Another superbly crafted and aspirational Chapter in the ongoing Saga.
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  • Mumbling Mutant 1 year ago
    am i dense? where is chapter 1-3?
  • Jeff Turick 1 year ago
    You can find them on the home page if you scroll down to the thumbnails. but I've also just posted the links to each chapter in the main credits of "Allison." Thanks for mentioning that.
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  • Josh Deveau 1 year ago
    Cinematography was really nice. Can't say I was crazy about the editing though.
  • Jeff Turick 1 year ago
    Thanks for the comment Josh. Just curious what about the editing you didn't like? was it an overall structural thing, or more of a stylistic choice?
  • Josh Deveau 1 year ago
    Just structural. I get really critical when it comes to editing though, so don't mind me. There were a few parts where there were hard, noticeable cuts. I, personally, feel like when you have content like this the editing should go unnoticed. This was also the first video that I saw of the whole series, so I was kinda like "what the hell is going on". It makes more sense now. I'm actually inspired to make something for this contest. I have a pretty good idea that would kinda change this whole story and make it really strange.
  • Jeff Turick 1 year ago
    I hear you, man, and I agree about some of the hard cuts. I can think of two edits right off the bat that were pretty blatant jump cuts that were done merely to save time cus of the 4 minute cap on the entry. Not preferred, just necessary! :)

    are you an editor by trade?
  • Josh Deveau 1 year ago
    I'm actually a student now, but it seems like my career is going way of editing and writing. I think the one cut I noticed the most was mainly because he is facing a different direction once cut. I watched this a few more time to figure out how I noticed it so easily. I would tell you the exact spot on the video, but it's not loading right now :/

    what do you use as an editor?
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  • Justin R. Durban 1 year ago
    This is a great continuation of the story! Congrats!
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  • Sherwin Lau 1 year ago
    Congrats! Great work!
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  • John Lamar 1 year ago
    Hi jeff. Thank you for getting back with me. In response to your question, forgive me I was unaware of the nature of the project and how it all works. I went to the vimeo home page and got all the info so forgive my ignorance. All the projects associated with this are simply awesome, can't wait to see to all the completed works. Take care.
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  • Bob Cummings plus 1 year ago
    Jeff, so well done, and what a great use of sound throughout the segment. Thanks for giving us the chance to see really good filmmaking.
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  • Tony Reidsma 1 year ago
    Best I've seen so far.
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  • David Swift 1 year ago
    I loved the cinematography. Excellent tones. However, I have to agree with others that the acting was a bit lackluster. Also, an audible "CUT" is heard at 2:32. Hope this criticism helps, I really wish the best for you in the contest.
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  • JonathanCruz 1 year ago
    Great job man waoh, im not even sure what more I can say lol its funny cause I saw this chapter before all the others n now im looking forward 2 the next one =) again great job
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  • BrookzLive 1 year ago
    This was truly superb I must Say... Great Work!!
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  • Nathan Farris 1 year ago
    I just finished watching chapters 1-4, Ilove it. The story,pacing and the characters and everything is great. I'm looking forward to more. God Bless.
  • Jeff Turick 1 year ago
    Thanks Nathan! I assume you've since seen Ch 5 & 6 too. It's a really remarkable contest. Glad you enjoyed it!
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  • IE·DNlab 1 year ago
    I really get a fan of this sequel.
    Watchin´ the first chapter, I didn´t get, what´s it about.
    You did a great job in continuing the story...love it!
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  • Kid Astro 6 months ago
    so like i havent pressed play yet. would it be a good idea to watch it from the beginning chapter wise ?
  • Jeff Turick 6 months ago
    I would definitely recommend watching all the chapters from the beginning. Or better yet, here's a link to the final, official version with all eight chapters stitched together:
    vimeo.com/groups/beyondthestill
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  • Kid Astro 6 months ago
    already did my friend, i like how you let people make them and continue the chapters etc, and i love it . im happy i made a vimeo and got to witness artt ! ahah
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