
Chapter 4: Allison
1 year ago
***Winning entry for Chapter 4, The Story Beyond the Still Contest***
Written & Directed by Jeff Turick
NewYorkDirectorofPhotography.com
Director's commentary with technical notes and extended beach scene here:
vimeo.com/11806174
Chapter 1: The Cabbie - vimeo.com/groups/beyondthestill/videos/8595246
Chapter 2: Job Security - vimeo.com/groups/beyondthestill/videos/9394817
Chapter 3: The Beach - vimeo.com/groups/beyondthestill/videos/10363683
CAST
Cabbie: Steven Nelson
Beachcomber: Clark Middleton
Allison: Daphne Ciccarelle
Thug 1: Solomon Shiv
Thug 2: Rory Dunwoody
Scientist: Tom Knutson
Babysitter: Kristen Turick
CREW
Director of Photography: Jeff Turick
Gaffer: Stephen Cannella
Jib Operator: Ian "The Finger" McGrew
Grip/Electric: Tom "Tommy Boy" Bartlett, Paul Carmine, Kenny Pelczar
Best Girl Electric: Kim Formisano
Makeup: Barbara Whitchurch asuitableimage.com
Production Coordinator: Stephen Stuart, Kristen Turick
Audio Engineer: Greg McKean
Production Assistant: Sara St. Leger
Original score by Jesse Solomon Clark jessesolomonclark.com
Some equipment provided by:
Dan Welch NewYorkVideoCrews.com
Chris Anderson nevessaproduction.com
Special thanks: Sarah Haas, Nicoelle Cohen, Ralph Umhoefer, Anne Carson, Kirk Nehring, Pablo Riera
Additional voice talent, Prisoners: Ana Alexandria Knight, Cheryl Pickett, Arthur Harold
Shot on a Canon 5D Mark II with Canon f/2.8 EF lenses: 16-35mm, 24-70mm, 70-200mm, and 100mm macro.
Written & Directed by Jeff Turick
NewYorkDirectorofPhotography.com
Director's commentary with technical notes and extended beach scene here:
vimeo.com/11806174
Chapter 1: The Cabbie - vimeo.com/groups/beyondthestill/videos/8595246
Chapter 2: Job Security - vimeo.com/groups/beyondthestill/videos/9394817
Chapter 3: The Beach - vimeo.com/groups/beyondthestill/videos/10363683
CAST
Cabbie: Steven Nelson
Beachcomber: Clark Middleton
Allison: Daphne Ciccarelle
Thug 1: Solomon Shiv
Thug 2: Rory Dunwoody
Scientist: Tom Knutson
Babysitter: Kristen Turick
CREW
Director of Photography: Jeff Turick
Gaffer: Stephen Cannella
Jib Operator: Ian "The Finger" McGrew
Grip/Electric: Tom "Tommy Boy" Bartlett, Paul Carmine, Kenny Pelczar
Best Girl Electric: Kim Formisano
Makeup: Barbara Whitchurch asuitableimage.com
Production Coordinator: Stephen Stuart, Kristen Turick
Audio Engineer: Greg McKean
Production Assistant: Sara St. Leger
Original score by Jesse Solomon Clark jessesolomonclark.com
Some equipment provided by:
Dan Welch NewYorkVideoCrews.com
Chris Anderson nevessaproduction.com
Special thanks: Sarah Haas, Nicoelle Cohen, Ralph Umhoefer, Anne Carson, Kirk Nehring, Pablo Riera
Additional voice talent, Prisoners: Ana Alexandria Knight, Cheryl Pickett, Arthur Harold
Shot on a Canon 5D Mark II with Canon f/2.8 EF lenses: 16-35mm, 24-70mm, 70-200mm, and 100mm macro.
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You have my vote.
There was one dolly shot we did in his family room (looking from another room) and that was done with an inexpensive skateboard dolly that I picked up from PaintedSheepDolly.com last year.
We were going to do a couple Steadicam shot on the beach, but had major probs there that I'll talk about on my blog, and i still plan on doing a commentary with the film.
Finally, the opening shot and all the scientist footage was shot from an 18' Jimmy Jib. My friend and colleague, Ian McGrew operated the jib on those and did an amazing job. The one shot at 3:15 is particularly impressive for what he did. The shot begins with him jibbing down, while dollying back (mind you, there was no track and no dolly grip, just the three fat jib wheels). As the camera reaches the corner of the table, it booms left, at which point Ian has to reverse his dolly direction and start pushing forward so he can get the boom over to the trunk, all while keeping track of pan/tilt and keeping it all fluid. I love it.
Thanks for the in-depth response and it was that very shot at 3:15 that prompted me to ask the question. I really love it... and not just the moves; the lighting and grading are looking great as well.
There were bigger probs with the story in this, as it didn't fit into the previous chapter, but still, how many voters are watching the otehr chapters and looking for those kind of details. This film looks amazing and it has real actors! That one guy was in FRINGE!!!! My fav!
Popper, I take complete responsibility for the Cabbie's reactions in the house. It was purely a directorial decision. In delving into the other episodes and observing the Cabbie, I found him to be rather stoic. In the backstory I considered for the character, I imagined him as having had some rather severe anger issues in the past. Those issues forced his wife to leave him and she ended up dying on the very day she left, leaving Cabbie alone with his daughter, and alone with a heavy burden of guilt that helped him to change.
The Cabbie, imo, doesn't deal with "what-ifs." "Why" people do things doesn't matter to him. Just how those things affect him. He's a matter-of-fact man who does what he needs to do to get by. So yes... when he arrives at home and notices the door smashed open, his only thought at that point is Allison. Is she safe? But he's also not an idiot. He's smart enough not to just charge into the house for her, knowing that the perpetrators may still be in there.
I could have taken the obvious route and had him freaking out about the babysitter, or rushing through the house a la Bourne Identity (which was my first thought), but once I start thinking about characters and people and what makes them respond to situations the way they do -- often in ways that surprise me -- that's when the obvious choices begin to dissipate, and where the more intriguing choices, I think, can be discovered. I'm sorry you didn't like my choice, but that's one of the aspects of filmmaking no one can do anything about: it's impossible to please everyone.
You cannot dramatise 'nothing' - If his reaction is to be a calm one, and thus unusual and abnormal to the way we expect him to react then the audience has to see an element of the abnormality dramatised - it's not enough for you to say it in Vimeo comments - you have to say it in the film.
Basic directing is story first through actors and THEN comes the cinematography - it can look incredible, but bad acting turns audiences away - unless your audience is full of cinematographers.....
thanks for the kudos on the cinematography tho!
Enjoyed watching the commentary too. Very interesting.
Regards,
Adrian.
first class !
Well done, hugely inspirational. LIKED!
are you an editor by trade?
what do you use as an editor?
Watchin´ the first chapter, I didn´t get, what´s it about.
You did a great job in continuing the story...love it!
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