I like this version much better. There is better shot selection and variation, better rhythm, and the added editing effects are great.

This is a really stunning piece.

Really love this version. To me, it's really really much better. Superb !! Find it more poetic ! Doesn't change it was a awesome/incredible work.

Hey JC - it looks really pro etc etc but it did lost "the thing" :(

this version's greaat. i just love the titel screen on the old video.

Hmmm frankly this version is much softer than the previous one and after watching it and having in memory the old one I've been missing something. So I've watched previous one again and I know what I'm missing - life and expression. But after all once again great video with a great touch.

this edit definitely has another tone to it especially alongside the new audio track...i think they stand alone by themselves and are two great pieces...my advice is to submit the edit you have all the rights to to a few film festivals to see what happens...i can almost guarantee it will get in somewhere...maybe try the European film festivals...they're free to submit to ususally...here's a website that i use to find and submit to festivals: shortfilmdepot.com or try withoutabox.com. great work though man...can't wait to see the next post...

I would have to say that this version is smoother and a lot more polished than ver. #1. A very solid effort, congrats!

fantastic! that is beautiful! this one is much better! was the glow affect a plugin or included in fcp?....... fantastic!

p.s. any tips for to making a good video?

can't wait to see you next video

Beautiful. I absolutely love it.

equally awesome.

wow, i really love those petals. they look like rain in a few shots. that's the best use of the glow effect.

very clean.

really beautiful!

That was stunning! The flower pedals made it just beautiful to look at. I love it. Great work man.

Beautiful color. I just watched your first vid and then this. Can't wait to see what you do in another 4 months.

interesting re-edit dude, looks good.

This is wonderful to watch! The colors, the body movement, the music, the light, ...

Great!

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kEeP iT uP.

cHeErS!

I have to agree with Viperos. The mood of the piece has changed entirely, and on its own, its great. But for me, the first piece had more 'raw-ness'. The variety on this edit is better...but the music didn't have the same energy to carry the visuals as version 1.

absolutely amazing.

that fourth shot is one of my favorites!

How is this "glow effect" done? In post i assume, what program was used?

sick video mate.
very jealous of your camera skills.
im sure a lot of people have already asked but uh
what kind of camera are you using again?

One of the most awesome vids I've ever seen... Very inspiring man, keep it up!

That was superb. This is now one of my favorite videos I have ever seen.

Nice, nice, nice. I've watched it about five times now. @2:27 = awesomeness. I love the brightness; the burn. Well done and inspiring. It kind of makes me want to get up... run around, jumping and spinning...

Very inspiring video. I love the editing and the shots were fantastic!

You achieved a fantastic with this piece.. Did you mess with any of the look settings in the HVX?

superb

i have to say that the original is better. i mixed better and it felt like it went together better. keep up the great work but keep some of your original stuff. if you like me i re-edit stuff a couple times when the first version is what i put the most dedication into and it is usually the best.

i like this, but i liked the tempo of the last one more as it was more in your face and woooooww. But its still great Jordan well done.

WOW. i really enjoyed that

I like the tone and softness of this one much better - the music score didn't seem to fit on the previous one (my personal taste). This one is beautiful!! Beautiful processing effects...

enjoyed the video. what kind of camera do you use?

Hey,
I like your work, the HVX200 looks pretty good, doesn't ?

I didn't know the HVX200 shot a frame speed that fast. What was the fps? I'd some work with a Sony HDV Z1U.. it looks good and all, but when dealing with slow motion, it's not good what so ever because it doesn't shoot that high of a frame speed. Where was this shot?

fantastique!

this video has encouraged me to learn how to do a back flip

You should do a series of 'extreme walking' videos like this one, as one might do skate videos etc. you've already got the obligatory 'fisheye' lens i see.
Looks great, but I like the music from the first better. Maybe I'm just a sucker for those bands, and you chose some of their best songs in the first one.
Titles were definitely an improvement, but I thought it would be cool if the titles could actually move in a 'human' way that would be cool- or maybe get people to spell out the title with their bodies and key that in? Just a thought- If I remember you said that this is for a class project, and I'm sure that you're ready to move on from this. Great work!

This is SUPER
Wonderful editing!!!