
Nidus
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Nidus - A short, non-narrative, abstract film.
* Featured Film on studentfilms.com - July 2010 *
Written and Directed by Keahn Rahimi
Starring Steve Marchlewski
Filmed on the Sony XDCAM PMW-EX3
* Featured Film on studentfilms.com - July 2010 *
Written and Directed by Keahn Rahimi
Starring Steve Marchlewski
Filmed on the Sony XDCAM PMW-EX3
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Mike Marchlewski 1 year agovery cool (even though Steve's in it)!!! -
Jason Barnett 1 year agoComment from a sound guy. First of all, the overall soundtrack is pretty solid. I think there may be a few too many elements for such a short film. For instance, you have the sound of the nesting dolls appearing as a motif throughout, but when the chicken egg breaks on the skillet, we have a new, musical sound effect that occurs once and that is it. It breaks the motif and does not continue itself. Also, I feel like the dolls at the end are under-emphasized. This may be where you bring in a new sound to break the current motif. There are a few more technical things that could be done with the ambiance to clarify the intent, also. Of course, these comments are subjective and I wouldn't make them if I did not think it was already very good. Kudos. -
Keahn Rahimi 1 year agoVery constructive comments, thank you.
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