I don't see why someone with motion graphics skills couldn't do something with this (unless they had no talent lol) - everything is there -- in terms of images (never lacking in that area) and the story is quite good (always have a good story to tell). So as a rough sketch it actually has a good feel to it. Of course what makes it special is the interaction of the images- sketched -painted etc. Yea I like this - and that is what I said one morning when I decided to quit smoking - I Don't want to die!

I was thinking a lot about the vocal fx you have here - the vocal transformer thingy in GB that u are using. Do you want to keep it? If so I would suggest to create change in the voice by alternating the octaves, for example, make the octaves go up and down - let me listen to it again....

part of it looks like scrolling down a web page
that intermixed with painted face stop action might be enough.
some extra curvey geometric animation is external to the core. i am not sure why it is ranging that far.
i liked the sound track, some of the smooth video needs to be more steppy, buffered and less smooth will make live action more art.

in an itin movie, i expect live action and panoramas, live action and transportation, while art layers are the stronger elements - punched with stop frame action. image reversal, shadow emphasis...
(i.e. a change every 1/6 or 1/7th second at the most.)

uhm... can i please have a LOVE button for this?

a lot of cool ideas in here, creative! thanks for sharing with me....

i like this. well done.

I really like this a lot.

The only thing I would recommend is to come up with more creative transitions that aren't just scrolling. It's probably okay to do it for a couple but not for all of the first 2/3 of the video. Maybe have elements fly in from different sides or have things appear as one thing but actually be revealed as something else, etc.

Also I'd like if more of the visuals were synced with the audio, especially the beginning maybe the faces change as the audio does at certain points.

this is really really awesome and I like that you are trying out something new. I can't wait to see more!

I could see it in the Hirshhorn here in DC, good job.

well I just want you to know that here it is days later but nearly all these images stuck with me- I could recall just about all of them. That really is something - so I hope you will continue with this as it is clearly more than just an idea.

He was popular, I see he got many views. Still think this is very good, came back for thirds. :-)

You're quoting Ice Cube, right?