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21. Darth FOB
10 months ago
12. Chapter 6: Fool Circle
1 year ago
WINNER, CHAPTER SIX, CANON & VIMEO "BEYOND THE STILL" COMPETITION

“FOOL CIRCLE” REFERENCES/TRIBUTES/SYMBOLISMS (for those that care)(in no particular order): “Delaware Beach Times newspaper (Delaware coin in THE BEACH); Allison’s picture in newspaper is taken on a beach (beach in THE BEACH and ALLISON); strangulation (security guard in JOB SECURITY and babysitter in ALLISON); gunshots mentioned while psychiatrist was on cell (gunshots in THE BEACH); key in the ignition shot (tribute to the first member-made film that started us down this crazy road with JOB SECURITY); the name “Vinnie Phillps” (my personal tribute to Vincent LaForet and Phillip Bloom, the two guys, whose works, influenced me to switch from HDV to DSLR’s earlier this year); the line “I got us plane tickets” (reference to the airport in THE CABBIE, and a play on words of the title name, indicating the story is coming full circle); “how long has this particular episode lasted - 23 minutes now” (the approximate total running time of every chapter up to that point); “go change the tape” (reference to the video cameras in ALLISON); Allison in the trunk (reference to the moving trunk in THE CABBIE and JOB SECURITY); and the characters were all deliberate. What wasn’t deliberate was Vinnie’s earplugs being full circles, lol.

note: Our view numbers from 7/30 are a little disturbing by the way...lol. hopefully its just symbolism about our chapter 6 story about a crazy murderer. lol.

"Chapter Six:Fool Circle" is my Chapter 6 entry into "The Story Beyond The Still" contest. It is a continuation from the previous chapters and is my interpretation of the story thus far.
Catch up with the other 5 chapters here:
Chapter 1: vimeo.com/groups/beyondthestill/videos/8595246
Chapter 2: vimeo.com/groups/beyondthestill/videos/9394817
Chapter 3: vimeo.com/groups/beyondthestill/videos/10363683
Chapter 4: vimeo.com/groups/beyondthestill/videos/11434588
Chapter 5: vimeo.com/groups/beyondthestill/videos/12475071

Executive Producer/Director/Camera/Editor: Marc Jonathan de Jesus

Story by: Marc Jonathan de Jesus

Written by: Marc Jonathan de Jesus & Chris "CARM" Armstrong

Producer/Location/Wardrobe/Props/Vehicles/Casting: Chris "CARM" Armstrong

THE CAST
Vincent "Vinnie" Phillips: Conrad Hernandez (conlennon5@yahoo.com)
Allison Phillips: Ireland Rose Smith (videosmithlaguna@aol.com)
Government Scientist/Psychiatrist: Morgan Roy morganroy.com
Government Executive/Orderly #1: Adam O'Neill (oneillfilm@gmail.com)
FBI Agent/Orderly #2: Chris "CARM" Armstrong (FoolCircleProducer@gmail.com)
Sonny the Taxi Driver: Robert S. Smith (videosmithlaguna@aol.com)

Film Score by: Asaf Fulks and Nick Doidge, The OC Recording Company ocrecording.com

Thanks to:
Howard's Garage & Classic Car Restoration (cadi49@cc.rr.com)
Orange County Yellow Cab (714) 999-9999

Special Thanks to:
Josie & Marcelo de Jesus
Elizabeth Armstrong
Asaf Fulks @ ocrecording.com
Robert & Robin Smith
Joe Aldana
Jeff Bardzik
Carl Bulanek
Holly & Mark Fisher
Brad NewMyer
Mark Sevi
Terri Shannon
Marshall Young
Monogram Magic - (949) 770-5056

"Fool Circle" was shot primarily on the 5D... but I shot 2 scenes with the 7D (when the 5D was wiggin out).

I apologize for the image quality of some of the shots, I think my 5D (which was purchased when it first came out) is ready to retire... or maybe im doing something wrong lol.

Lenses I used (all Canon): 50mm f1.2, 70-200mm IS f2.8, 16-35mm f2.8 & 24mm f1.4.

Edited using Premiere CS4, Cineform Prospect HD and Cineform Firstlight (4 color correction).

Other stuff I used: Glidetrack, Zacuto quick draw, Tascam dr-100, Rode NTG-3, couple of Litepanels, and a cheap Azden mic to mount on the 5D (oh yah, and a leatherman,.. watching macgyver as a kid paid off lol)(yes i know he used a swiss army knife).

Thank you to everyone involved for your time, talents, effort and patience, I really really appreciate it...

Really.

Thanks for spending 4 minutes of your time to watch.
Whether this things goes anywhere or not, the journey getting to this point of upload, was pretty crazy and well "worth it".. thank God for coffee.. and belvedere.. jk (or not) lol.

...finally, thank you to the pioneers of 5D film making.
  • Ryan Smith 1 year ago
    Pretty cool twist, yo! :D
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  • thanks "boss"
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  • Dan Rubottom plus 1 year ago
    Sweet editing!
  • appreciate the comment, especially coming from a talented dude as yourself
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  • Chris Royal 1 year ago
    This short rocks!!!
  • no u rock chris!
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  • Robert 1 year ago
    Fantastic story line. The video looks so high quality and the acting is tight. Amazing what you can do with a photo camera and very little budget. Just a couple of years ago this would of not been possible!
  • still not possible with your little lunix. lol jk
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  • this short looks very similar to 'Shutter Island'. Was that intentional?
  • not intentional. i dont think it looks anything like shutter island... concept may be similar.. but every movie in hollywood plays on themes/concepts of movies before them... its like american idol.. you take a concept/theme thats been used over and over again, and make it your own.
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  • Shutter Island looks very similar to The Sixth Sense, The Escapist, The Number 23, Muholland Dr., Seven, Vertigo, etc. Then there are the old Twilight tv shows like the one where you find out the people are not people, but actually just dolls in a dollhouse. Dicaprio himself said in an interview that the 1944 movie "Laura" was one of the movies they screened to prep for "Shutter Island."

    One could watch all these chapter series and find some similarities in each one to compare to other movies.

    Excellent work Marc! Congratulations for making the top 5! I am actually impressed with many of the entries it is clear people put in a lot of hard work, creativity and talent in these chapters.
  • well said... robin... man, you know your movies... very impressed!
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  • VTK Productions 1 year ago
    Great job. Kinda, only sorta, reminds me of 'The Jacket'.
  • Thanks for your compliment and support. I need to check out "The Jacket"... haven't seen it yet... at least u didn't say shutter island. lol. anyway thanks again. peace.
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  • I'm sorry, Marc. I didn't mean to offend you; I think you're editing is clearly the best of this round, as well as tone progression and an interesting twist. 'Fool Circle' looks a lot like 'Shutter Island' to me, which is a compliment. Good luck in the finals.
  • No, im not offended at all... trust me, im the first person to welcome critique... and i respect yours and everyone's opinion... thanks for your compliment.. im glad you appreciated my editing... and thank you too for taking the time to write another comment, i really think that's awesome of you to apologize, even though it clearly was not necessary... stay cool. my friend.
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  • ernie andrasik 1 year ago
    Check out the 3:10 mark, he is actually talking to the bear! sweeeet!!!!
  • hey that was supposed 2 be nearly subliminal!
  • Nathalia Vasquez 1 year ago
    Yes! Genious! It happens again in 3:33 with the shadow! Wonderful!
  • :) thanks... that was supposed to be nearly subliminal as well.. lol.. glad u appreciated it!!!!
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  • Ramon Tioseco 1 year ago
    Another Spielberg in the making!

    Mabuhay!
  • Uncle Moy!!! thank you soo much for your vote... Tell Zack and Auntie Nanette thanks to!! Hope your doing good!! Best Wishes!!!
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  • Great film Marc! I really like how you used the music to set the mood and intensity. It had me grabbing my seat right til the end! The editing was sweet! Good luck!
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  • bigmark 1 year ago
    Tight video. Extreme editing. You maintained the pace of the story and the facility that you used made the video have a very dark feeling.
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  • genevieve flores 1 year ago
    Good Luck Marc. We hope and pray for your success! You are brilliant...
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  • Dan Rubottom plus 1 year ago
    Big Congrats on the win man!
  • thanks just sent u a msg
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  • Raven Rubottom 1 year ago
    Congrats Marc! A big part of filmmaking is finding an audience. Finding votes on Pacland Boxing and the Asian Online Mag feature were nothing short of BRILLIANT on your part. We look forward to seeing your contribution on the final chapter with the other winners. You are talented and a fierce competitor- best to you!
  • Thanks!!!!! Yup, your exactly right. Some say the most important part of commercial filmmaking, is not production, but marketing/promotions.
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  • Best writing of the contest. Would have been a great closer, but the game goes on... I guess... Is chapter 7 the final for everyone to enter, or like Raven mentioned a collaboration effort from by all the previous winners?
  • Raven Rubottom 1 year ago
    One more competition, then the final with Vincent.
  • thanks Jon, very glad to hear that you appreciated our writing... I actually originally wanted to go with the clone storyline.. then I liked the delusional angle.. so, I decided to combine the two.. lol.. now im really curious, as im sure ryan before was, how people are going to continue on.. especially with the twists I threw in... btw, we intentionally left plenty of loose ends to tie up.. for ch7 to address
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  • Loreal Rivas 1 year ago
    CONGRATS ON WINNING MARCUSSSSS!! SO PROUD OF U! U OWE ME AND ROBERT IN-N-OUT

    XOXO
    GLOREAL
  • GLOREAL! nah... robert got his 5 minutes of fame..
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  • Excellent win, Marc. A very good film, most of those subtle nuances I didn't see, just makes my job that much harder now ;) NObody f**** with de Jesus, man!!
  • lol, thanks dude, you know how we do... good luck with the next chapter.. im curious to see what you go up your sleeve.
  • it's gonna be somethin..like you, I'm HDV -- up until now; this is my first foray into DSLR as a prime tool. We'll see what happens! really, great job man, I've probably watched it 25 times already
  • lol... sweet... yah theres a lot to digest in 4 minutes... i think the hardest thing to deal with from transitioning, is the focusing/monitor issues.. because i didnt have an eyepiece or a focus puller... good luck, im excited to see what youre up to, let me know if you got any questions
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  • Sean Meehan plus 1 year ago
    Congrats! Great work sir!
  • thanks sean.. congrats to you 2 for making top 5.. you're very talented... keep it up.. are u making a ch. 7?!
  • Sean Meehan plus 1 year ago
    Thanks Marc, the kind words are very appreciated! I might make one, not sure though. I'll need to cobble together some funds first:)
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  • ModLife 1 year ago
    Amazing, I liked :)
    Is there a 6th part?
  • thanks man.. glad u liked it... yah, its actually a 7th part... the entry deadline is later this month. check vimeo.com/groups/beyondthestill
  • ModLife 1 year ago
    Yes you're welcome, you have done a great movie.
    Alright, I'll check it them, thanks. :)
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  • sorry, but I did not like it, non the actors, non the story, worst video, from the winners.

    Congrazt anyway
  • thats cool.. thanks for watching anyway!
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  • Fernando Delfini 1 year ago
    Really impressive !!! How many cameras was used in this piece ??? Or are multiple cuts in every scene ??? Like in the "sanatory/medical" room
  • Thanks boss... i actually used only one camera.. and just shot multiple takes (which subsequently drove the cast crazy, lol)
  • Fernando Delfini 1 year ago
    really great ! i´m working in a project, and i always think if i will get a great result with the one camera i have...but, the cast will be very happy with several takes, lol =D I didn´t started the recordings, so i quote you =D thanks !
  • Yes, if you're actors are good enough to do the scene multiple times.. you can definitely get away with one camera.. the only thing that will be tricky is the sound.. good luck my friend
  • Fernando Delfini 1 year ago
    Yes, the only thing is the actors are advertising and public relations students, hahaha. The project is for a university work =D I think the recordings will be fun =D Thank you for the luck. I have some expertise in photograph, and now in videograph, so..fingers-crossed, hehehe. Thanks !
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  • Heath Cozens plus 1 year ago
    Nice work! The way you handled the is-he-or-isn't-he scenario was so much fun... I laughed out loud in pleasure at the twist. Great editing.
  • Thank you Heath, I'm glad you appreciated it and were entertained.. it's always cool to hear people's reactions good or bad.. best wishes!
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  • Chiara Cerutti 1 year ago
    wonderful editing, very expressive!!! :)
  • thanks! :) appreciate it
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  • Beto Lopez 1 year ago
    Congrats that was great!
  • thanks boss
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  • Brian Bachmann 1 year ago
    I feel this chapter should be the last one but your story line just demonstrate that narrative can achieve anything we can imagine and shock us out of our seats with great cinematography. Excellent work!!!!!
  • Thanks Brian very flattered by your compliments! appreciate it.
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  • Joe Salandanan plus 1 year ago
    Another talented Filipino.
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  • Birklund 1 year ago
    Very nice - I like the fuzzy reality! How come the bad guy has a germanish accent?
  • thanks dude. the scientist has a germanish accent cause that same character did in chapter 3 (or chapter 4,cant remember lol)
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  • Ovi Balc 1 year ago
    I'm addicted to films shot on DSLRs in low light. you did a great job. The editing is also top notch.
  • Thank you sir, appreciate it!! best wishes
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  • Marc, this is great man! I still push play almost everytime I visit the SBTS homepage! Very well done
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  • SonamGray 1 year ago
    Great vid, but in full screen, some of the dialogue isnt synced properly.
  • yah, i've noticed that, its weird, it was syncd in post and after upload, some parts were thrown out of sync. thanks for the heads up!! hopefully i can get a chance to fix that. wondered why you were the one to catch it, then i saw that your a sound guru.. thanks again!! best wishes
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  • Tomson Tee 1 year ago
    i love your rhythm, excellent work. a wonderful 6th installment.
  • thanks Tomson, glad you were entertained. best wishes man.
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  • IE·DNlab 1 year ago
    excellent editing and I loved, how you "melted" the different sets (when the guy was sitting on the chair)...
    LIKED
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  • Gregory Rhoades 1 year ago
    Loved the dramatic lighting and editing. Very cool.
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  • Jevon White 10 months ago
    Nice Work!
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