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This video opens with some scenes from a world famous university and an equally renowned annual art show... followed by some art masters' work from times gone by, now hanging in the Chicago Art Institute.

Some of the stories in this channel 'inspired' me to put a few of our pictures together and mix them with a sobering song.... things that university environments evoke.

For some reason, the panning and zooming of still pix seem most appropriate for such things.

It's done with Movie Maker 2.1, the new Pixelan Pan/Zoom Pro wizard, and Photo Story 3.
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  • Ted B. 1 month ago
    This is a great world class song by Eric Bogel you included with this piece. I thought I would add the lyrics. In some aspects, it reminds me of the American song by Marty Robbins, "Streets of Laredo"


    The Flowers Of The Forest

    Well how do you do, young Willy McBride?
    Do you mind if I sit here down by your graveside?
    And rest for a while neath the warm summer sun
    I've been walking all day, and I'm nearly done.

    And I see by your gravestone you were only nineteen
    When you joined the great falling in nineteen-sixteen.
    I hope you died quick well and I hope you died clean
    Or Willy McBride, was is it slow and obscene.

    Did they beat the drums slowly?
    Did they play the fife lowly?
    Did they sound the death march as they lowered you down?
    And did the band play 'The Last Post' and chorus?
    Did the pipes play 'The Flowers Of The Forest'?

    Did you leave a wife or a sweetheart behind?
    In some faithful heart is your memory enshrined?
    And though you died back in nineteen-sixteen
    In that faithful heart you're forever nineteen?

    Or are you a stranger without even a name
    Forever enshrined behind some old glass pane?
    In an old photograph torn, tattered, and stained
    And faded to yellow in a brown leather frame.

    Did they beat the drums slowly?
    Did they play the fife lowly?
    Did they sound the death march as they lowered you down?
    And did the band play 'The Last Post' and chorus?
    Did the pipes play 'The Flowers Of The Forest'?

    The sun shining down on these green fields of France,
    The warm wind blows gently and the red poppies dance.
    The trenches have vanished long under the plow,
    No gas, no barbed wire, no guns firing now.

    But here in this graveyard that's still no mans land,
    The countless white crosses in mute witness stand.
    To man's blind indifference to his fellow man
    And a whole generation were butchered and damned.

    Did they beat the drums slowly?
    Did they play the fife lowly?
    Did they sound the death march as they lowered you down?
    And did the band play 'The Last Post' and chorus?
    Did the pipes play 'The Flowers Of The Forest'?

    And I can't help but wonder oh Willy McBride,
    Do all those who lie here know why they died?
    Did you really believe them when they told you the cause?
    Did you really believe that this war would end wars?

    Well the suffering, the sorrow, the glory, the shame,
    The killing and dying it was all done in vain.
    Oh Willy McBride it all happened again,
    And again, and again, and again, and again.

    Did they beat the drums slowly?
    Did they play the fife lowly?
    Did they sound the death march as they lowered you down?
    And did the band play 'The Last Post' and chorus?
    Did the pipes play 'The Flowers Of The Forest'?
  • Ray Anderson 1 month ago
    Thanks for the lyrics, Ted. They're fine to have and especially here so one can have an even better appreciation of PapaJohn's subtle--even sly--piece. (The similarity to Streets of Laredo is a really good observation, too.)
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  • Ray Anderson 1 month ago
    I have a sneaking suspicion you knew you'd hear from me about this one. I love it! You know that I think you have a special touch when it comes to evoking the American spirit, and this piece, too, does that--but an aspect different from the one that has been your past subject. You sure as hell resist stereotyping, John! Can I be bold enough to make two suggestions? I really like the way you link up the hodgepodge of political postings with the orderly display of (rather conventional) paintings. Might the connection and your (I must say) political comment be reinforced to good purpose by morphing from one of the political posts to one of the paintings as a transition? That would also give more time for the music to end in a more satisfactory way instead of what I feel is now abrupt. I can't imagine a better choice of music. I enjoyed watching this piece as much as anything else I've seen from PS addicts. Thanks, John.
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  • PapaJohn 1 month ago
    More than a sneaking suspicion at my end, almost a certainty. I'm glad you liked it.

    I like your idea of the morphing... at the risk of bumping too closely into copyright issues, which is why I cut the music. I'll try stopping it someplace else but it still might not be satisfying until you finish reading the lyrics Ted posted.

    It's rare that I risk copyright issues, but this project seems like a good one to test the boundaries.
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  • PapaJohn 1 month ago
    I edited it a bit more, adding a morph and extending the music to a less abrupt fade point. This was rendered to an HD 720 size, which might make it less smooth in playback.... it needs another round of editing.
  • Ray Anderson 1 month ago
    That morph is just right. The music fade, as you say, is less abrupt, but of course still abrupt. I don't know how to give the viewer a sense of resolution--to me, a critical consideration--without staying with the music until it's finished. All this is related in my mind to Yogi Berra's observation that the game ain't over 'til it's over. I'm glad you intend to keep fiddling with the piece.
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  • Ted B. 1 month ago
    LOL Ray. you took note as well? The political message here may not be as subtle as one may think.

    And PapaJohn, with your focus on left wing, socialists posters along with song selection, you did a brilliant job making a statement without saying a word. ;-)

    I felt the final stanza sums it up nicely:

    "The killing and dying it was all done in vain.
    Oh Willy McBride it all happened again,
    And again, and again, and again, and again."

    I shan't discuss politics or political persuasions here, and even though I may lean a little further right than left, this is also about art. Right wingers and left wingers alike will surely enjoy the superb job you did on this clip, especially those who know the audio.

    And I truly enjoyed the clip and wouldn’t mind the full audio should you ever decide to post it along with a video.

    Just a suggestion, if you are looking for a clean audio finish, you can overlay your intermediate ending of "The Flowers Of The Forest" with the beginning of a short instrumental piece using fade out / fade in and carry it through to the end. A few seconds overlay will take care of the transition nicely and the end of the second clip will result in a smooth finish. This may require timing adjustment or a few extra slides.

    And oh yeah, did I mention 'twas about "art-istic liberty". ;-)

    And thanks once again for this piece.
  • Ray Anderson 1 month ago
    Well, Ted, if you plan on stealing second base, leaning to the right is OK, but it's also a good way to get picked off ROTFL (the metaphor tends to break down when it comes to my leanings!). What I like about PapaJohn--and it's nowhere better illustrated than in this piece--is that he doesn't seem to lean either way, just stays within himself like the best hitters, and as a result there's something in this neat little piece for everyone. And good for you for being bolder than I with your audio suggestion--am I right in thinking you have Audacity in mind, or are you thinking of other software that I, too, would find useful?
  • Ted B. 1 month ago
    LOL Ray, But it is the only way to steal extra bases, and sometimes the winning run, that is if one don't get picked off. ;-)

    And I agree, there is something in this piece for everyone, even though revolutionaries may wish to claim it as their own. Don't you think PapaJohn has created an excelllent discussion piece. From an artistic standpoint, I think it is a masterpiece.

    Psssst... And what do you think of this as the instrumental ending to really heat up a discussion:

    strategypage.com/gallery/images/echotaps.mp3
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    Yeah, I frequently use Audacity to manipulate audio. It's open source and falls under the GNU GPL license. An excellent piece of software for this function, especially considering the price.
  • Ray Anderson 1 month ago
    Yes, John indeed has made an intriguing piece because it avoids controversy--I think that's his natural bent, not to choose sides but to let his good common sense come to the fore. I know you meant taps with your tongue probing for your cheek, but I'm going to leave it alone--we have so much and so many all over the world to grieve for that I don't want to go down that road.
  • Ted B. 1 month ago
    Yeah Ray, this truly is a piece that anybody can read any way they wish and walk away feeling it may have been done for them. I wouldn't consider it controversial, rather it spawns healthy discussion.

    And I cautiously mentioned Taps, not as much tongue in cheek, rather as a solemn, haunting melody to stir emotions in the soul of the listener and reinforce the message of John's video. And I said cautiously because I realized the intent of the comment could easily be misconstrued.

    I'm looking forward to the final cut.
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  • PapaJohn 1 month ago
    Hi Ray and Ted... we went to Chicago for the day to round up some more pix and video clips. I'm just making a pass through the emails and posts of the day, and don't have time for any serious thinking. I'll join you again tomorrow.

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  • PapaJohn 1 month ago
    Thanks Ted... yes, that's a great instrumental piece and I'll fold it in for the finish.

    Your comment on it being an artistic masterpiece brings back memories of a college art professor who walked behind me during a sketching session and said '.... that's great, don't screw it up...'. Where does one go from there, especially when one is an engineering student?

    I don't want to shorten the starting music and am inclined not to cut the Taps short also, so I'll add more to the visual.

    The piece will go from 2-1/4 minutes to 3-1/4, an extra minute for thoughtful reflection.

    Ren Yen added it to his 'Framed Art Paintings, works of watercolor ink acrylic oil.' channel of vimeo. For that, I'm thinking of another morphing to lead into the taps... from the art show of today at Ann Arbor to the masters of old at the Art Institute of Chicago. On our trip yesterday, we spent a couple hours taking pix of their paintings and sculptures. I should be able to blend things together to help the commentary continue.
  • Ray Anderson 1 month ago
    It's one thing to use the Sunday paintings you found at the fair, John, but I'm nervously eager to see what you do with real art--that stuff has a way of having a mind of its own. But do keep up the dialogue--this stuff is healthy and makes PhotoStory more than a toy.
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  • PapaJohn 1 month ago
    I agree Ray. To the extent I can help shift discussion about the tool to the content... and the meanings or interpretations of it.... that's more than I expected. Most of my personal video work is to illustrate what can be done in the hands of the skilled, not to actually do it. We'll see.
  • Ted B. 1 month ago
    Well John, looks like you may have 'gone and done it' - this time. ;-)

    I think the tool has been forgotten and it's all about content and presentation, the criteria for prize winning videos and films.

    As I mentioned to Ray ^^, I'm looking forward to the final cut.

    I'll be traveling for the next three weeks, commencing tomorrow, and may not have ready Internet access most of the time, but I'll check back when able.

    Ray and John, have a great evening.
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  • PapaJohn 1 month ago
    You didn't have to wait very long Ray... the next draft is being processed by vimeo.
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  • PapaJohn 1 month ago
    Have a great trip Ted.
  • Ted B. 1 month ago
    Thanks John

    It's 3:00AM here and I see you are working late also. I think we are both on EST unless you are still in Chicago and 1 hour behind us in the YYZ territory. I'm on the road 7:00AM and have to catch a few zzzzs.

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  • PapaJohn 1 month ago
    Yes, Eastern time here and it's late as usual for me.

    I just posted a comment in the help section of vimeo as the replacement video didn't effectively replace the original.... maybe giving me a 2nd vote for not using the new draft.... Bernadette, my wife, being the other one. She thinks the cut to the art in Chicago confuses the subject... maybe so.
  • Ray Anderson 1 month ago
    Boy, a guy tries to take a snooze and the world passes him by. You get into a new iteration of your vid, and Ted, after some astute comments, is off to make his fortune. Keeping up with you guys isn't a matter of getting up early but of staying up late! "To the extent I can help shift discussion about the tool to the content... and the meanings or interpretations of it.... that's more than I expected." You know well that I think what you describe is the right goal, and your combination of expertise and skill coupled with your sensibility positions you to be in the vanguard. Bernadette is exactly right--the additional "real" art may appear heavy-handed, but two or three of Goya's Disasters of War might blow folks away. My feeling is that you should see what happens with additional images, and let Bernadette, your fans, and Roberta Smith of the NY Times decide whether you've succeeded. I'll check out your new draft, which I think Vimeo is putting up as we speak.
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  • PapaJohn 1 month ago
    I don't think Ted saw the new version... I couldn't from my end until I learned about toggling the HD - On/Off switch.
  • Ray Anderson 1 month ago
    I just played your piece following your instructions. (It amused me to think you could use it to broadcast your universal appeal: HD On for the political left, Off for the right--or does that betray my leanings?) I think the ending about reflection (and with the reflections behind it) is vintage PapaJohn and I like it, but I think Bernadette was half right about the Chicago pictures: if you had those Goyas that I suggested plus a couple of Wellington-at-Waterloo type paintings, you could justify your interesting and very PapaJohn ending, but as is, no. As to taps, I stand by what I said to Ted. Five years in the USAF in the late forties and early fifties as well as the memory of Montgomery Clift playing taps with tears in his eyes in From Here to Eternity tell me to leave taps out.
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  • PapaJohn 1 month ago
    Thanks Ray.... I'm going back to first version while I mull it over some more.
  • Ray Anderson 1 month ago
    Just for drill, John, as we used to say, you might want to check out this clip: youtube.com/watch?v=9fxH-2LnRkc
    Turns out not surprisingly that someone has managed to put up the taps segment of FHTE on YT.
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  • PapaJohn 1 month ago
    thanks Ray... I made a copy of the clip's audio for my library... the visual is a good example of how to use it.

    The HD toggle is still working fine... but I replaced the new version with the first so it's the same for HD On or Off. As you noted, maybe we can have fun with it as a 'feature'.
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