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- Winner 2010 Milan International Film Festival Award for Best Short Film (15-30 mins)
- Winner 2010 SHORTini International Short Film Festival Award for Best Short Film
- Winner 2010 Australian Directors Guild Award for Best Direction in a Short Film
- Winner 2009 AFI Award for Outstanding Achievement in Short Film Screen Craft - Cinematography
- Nominated 2009 AFI Award for Best Short Fiction Film and Best Screenplay in a Short Film

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  • Sam Morrill staff 1 year ago
    This is heartbreaking. Outstanding performances all around. Thanks for posting.
  • Corrie Jones 1 year ago
    Thanks Sam! I really appreciate it. Thanks for accepting my film as well. Cheers!
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  • Forrest Pando plus 1 year ago
    Hey...This is beautiful. I thought for very little words you got a tremendously complex story across, and that is a huge part of cinema. I felt as though his anger towards his dad was something that was not ongoing and began about 5 minutes into the film. Other than that the pacing was Great! I had chills of joy at the end and the build up you created made that happen. Great work! What did you guys film this on?
  • Corrie Jones 1 year ago
    Thanks Forrest! We shot the film on a Sony F900 with a Angenieux 35mm primes adaptor and a set of 35mm Zeiss Ultra Primes. The DOP pushed the camera a lot to achieve the look we wanted.
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  • ArtSocket plus 1 year ago
    This is great, thanks Corrie.
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  • Alex Fischer plus 1 year ago
    this is one of the best short films I've seen. i would watch the feature version of this.. any chance of that?? congrats on all the success so far-
  • Corrie Jones 1 year ago
    Thanks Alex. I'm not sure about a feature version, but I'm developing a couple of other ideas. Fingers crossed one day hopefully.
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  • Gjergj Kalaja 1 year ago
    Amazing piece of cinema.
    Thanks for sharing it with us on Vimeo.
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  • Ishtiaq Rahman 1 year ago
    awesome work! keep it coming
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  • Joe 1 year ago
    Whoa! Excellent work by all involved.
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  • Sam Harvey 1 year ago
    I just can't tell you how much this film has really meant to me, thank you so much for doing what you do.
  • Corrie Jones 1 year ago
    That means a lot. Thanks Sam!
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  • Fredrik Nilsson 1 year ago
    I am extremely sick ATM so there could be parts I did not get - but did the boy drowned his father 'cause he was handicapped and annoying?
  • Gjergj Kalaja 1 year ago
    Watch it again when you will be better. :)
  • Fredrik Nilsson 1 year ago
    Okey, I'll be back :)
    (I've got pneumonia and a fever so I'm not that bright for the moment :P)
  • Corrie Jones 1 year ago
    It's a pretty ambiguous ending, but Gjergi is right. As is Joshua. Hopefully you'll see it differently if you watch it again :)
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  • Marcelo Reis plus 1 year ago
    strong
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  • Fantastic!
    Have you seen the no-budget college-class-produced web series that was written up in the New York Times?
    Check it out at jer3miah.com or vimeo.com/channels/jer3miah
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  • Dillan Forsey 1 year ago
    Really a joy to watch... great shots, great story. The subject matter was very compelling. I like that you left enough details out that it kind of let the audience draw their own conclusions as to how the characters ended up in that situation and how they would move forward in it. The subtle hints left me thinking about this for quite a while after. In a sense you allowed the viewers to put themselves in the shoes of the boy which is just fantastic.

    Was the color scheme planned? Blue walls... blue clothing... blue bath tub... Have something to do with the title?
  • Corrie Jones 1 year ago
    Thanks Dillan. You definitely responded to the film as I hoped people would. And yeah, the color scheme was all pre-planned and realised during production to give the film a 'watery' palette in line with the title.
  • Dillan Forsey 1 year ago
    That's awesome! That kind of attention to detail is really impressive.
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  • Joe Moya plus 1 year ago
    Impressive work... excellent editing...

    Draws you into a real world... tugs at your emotions... and defines a new perspective.

    This short does more in 15 mins. than many a multi-million, multi-hour long cinematic production.

    Very Good Work!!!!
  • Corrie Jones 1 year ago
    Thanks Joe. I really appreciate your comment.
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  • Jace Breeback 1 year ago
    Simply incredible work. Can't wait to share this...
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  • K C plus 1 year ago
    Intense. I had a friend in grade school whose older brother nearly drowned in a home pool and was left brain damaged and in a very similar state. Your film brought back the memories of frustration and anger in the day-to-day lives of that family that was so apparent to me back then. Excellent work. I'm going to share this over at MilkandCookies.com. Good luck to you.
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  • Steve Lundy plus 1 year ago
    Very moving!
    I have a 7 year old son. Makes me think.
    Keep on doing what you do.
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  • Ivan Galvan 1 year ago
    Great!.....7D?
  • Corrie Jones 1 year ago
    No, we shot the film in the days before the 7D, 5D or even the Red. We shot the film on a Sony F900 with a Angenieux 35mm primes adaptor and a set of 35mm Zeiss Ultra Primes. The DOP had to really push the camera a lot to achieve the look we wanted.
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  • Michael V Brown 1 year ago
    Emotionally gripping that's for sure. This is what student film makers like myself need to strive for.
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  • Nora Rye 1 year ago
    this is incredible. thank you for making a film about something real.
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  • Glen Hwang 1 year ago
    Absolutely intense. Your film raises questions most people are too afraid to face.

    Great job, Corrie!
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  • Jon Meyer 1 year ago
    am I the only one who thought that the kid might just be wanting to bathe him and begin sharing the duty?
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  • Alicia 1 year ago
    @Jonathan meyer Yea I felt that at the end.
    Also I bawled my eyes out. I'm not gonna lie. Very intense and beautiful.
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  • Dalton Smith 1 year ago
    Incredible
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  • jey 1 year ago
    Fantastic Work Corrie. I can relate to it. Thanks for making it.
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  • cem şahin 1 year ago
    Watching it was tasteful from beginning to end. good job ;)
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  • Clifton Archuleta plus 1 year ago
    Such a powerful and elegant short! Excellent use of subtlety. I find this quality of work inspiring.
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  • Harshita Mahajan 1 year ago
    Amazing. Need more such work on disability. I also cried like a baby while watching it. Ofcourse Toby doesnt drown his dad! the last few seconds show Toby's awakening. It is unequivocal. Look at Toby's face, his gentle touch....
  • Corrie Jones 1 year ago
    Thanks Harshita!
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  • Mike Kotsch 1 year ago
    Simply fantastic!
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  • lintje 1 year ago
    this is really great and authentic,
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  • Max Uusimaa 1 year ago
    A fantastic short film that grabs you from the start. It's a eally beautiful story.
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  • Aimz 1 year ago
    simply beautiful! great storyline indeed.
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  • kute dymples 1 year ago
    Incredible.
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  • Jim Downey 1 year ago
    Corrie - wonderfully done. As someone who has been a care provider, I can attest that you have captured and conveyed the mix of emotions brilliantly.

    Pingback here: communionblog.wordpress.com/2010/11/18/to-be-touched-by-water/
  • Corrie Jones 1 year ago
    Thanks Jim!
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  • sc 1 year ago
    The man in this video is imitating severe autism as well as what appears to be cerebral palsy. I'm not aware of anyone with severe autism ever having been a parent. I have mixed emotions about this film as a parent of an autistic child. Its beautifully shot but gives the viewer a very one sided view of the emotions surrounding family and caregivers to severely autistic people and it doesn't portray severe autism in a comprehensive way. Sort of like viewing one side of a two sided coin. When autistic people are murdered by their families and care givers on an almost daily basis, I think there is a special responsibility of a film maker to give a more thoughtful presentation of these very vulnerable human beings. My son brings great joy into my life, he is very loving. This film left me with a bad taste.

    Perhaps I live a bit too close with autism to be objective on this, but for your viewers, I want them to know this is not a complete picture of severe autism. The character in this short film was just an object to create an ethos. Severely autistic people do bring joy to people's lives and they do express love to others in ways we all can recognize.

    If anyone wants a complete picture of severe autism, there is a youtube channel called kgaccount that portrays all the bad like you find in this film along with all the good too with an actual severely autistic young man. There is not a one sided view of the disability there. You can really understand what life is like living with a severely disabled adult with severe autism. I think by watching those videos you will cheer for both the severely autistic person as well as his family as they honestly show the world their lives. Don't get your information on this disability from this short film.
  • Corrie Jones 1 year ago
    Hi sc, I wouldn't normally do this, as for I guess once a film is out there in the real world it will be always be interpreted and judged on it's own merits. But because you're a parent of an autistic child, I feel I should at least clarify some story points for you - only to hopefully relieve you of some of the mixed emotions you may be feeling about the film.

    The character Sean actually suffers from an acquired brain injury from a surfing accident as an adult. This is alluded to through the photos of him 'normal' and the dialogue "... your Father taught me how to surf".

    Obviously, they are very different disabilities but share some common symptoms. And I appreciate how you may see similarities in them and associate with Sean's disability as such - living with it everyday yourself.

    I also don't think the film gives only a one sided view of the emotions surrounding disability, as all the character's struggle with it in their own ways - especially Sean who tries to regain his independence and a sense of being 'normal' again. It is a grim view though, as it's a story told through a young boys eyes who hasn't yet learnt to deal with the situation he is in.

    How you feel about your son was actually the intention with the final moments of the film - that Toby finally sees his Father as a person, not just a 'retard' (as horrible as that sounds, I know) and accepts his new role in his Fathers life.

    As Harshita comments "Of course Toby doesn't drown his dad! The last few seconds show Toby's awakening. It is unequivocal. Look at Toby's face, his gentle touch.... "

    Anyway, I hate defending the film, but I felt I owed it to you in some way.

    FYI another film that you may find interesting and very poignant is 'The Black Balloon'. It is a beautiful film that I think you'll really enjoy and is about a family with an autistic son as well.

    All the best!
  • Sam Ellens 1 year ago
    the water poured over the head causing such a reaction and the title were also good hints that it involved some sort of seaborne accident. my impression was that he nearly drowned.
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  • Gabriel Stephen 1 year ago
    This to me is a perfect example of less is more. Very little dialogue allowed your shot compositions to speak for itself. The POV's of the child where very powerful. I must say even if their was no dialogue it would bring out the same emotions, thanks to your shot compositions. Another thing was the blue hue that you used for the interior shots really added to the emotional distress they all felt. This is a great film.
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  • Lee Deaville 1 year ago
    Involving, thought-provoking and stirring.

    Incredible work, truly inspirational filmmaking.
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  • Matt Brundige plus 1 year ago
    Great job Corrie. The pacing, the shot choice, the still moments that were captured allowed me to really think and create the chaotic world that was going on in every characters mind. Thanks for adding to the select few that can truly show so much without saying too much. Giving the audience the benefit of the doubt that we are capable of following and creating the story in our mind with what we see, hear and pick up on is always risky but an amazing thing when it works out. And in this case it surely did. Thanks.
  • Corrie Jones 1 year ago
    Thanks Matt.
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  • chiara rizzolo 1 year ago
    so so so beautiful! I love the way blue colours ( V chakra, related to Communication and located in the throat, shoulders, arms, hands and fingers) permeate the whole scene, where verbal communication is almost completely lacking. Perfect characters choice, the child's dilated and responsive face finds its perfect counterpart into the father's contracted body.. they use no words yet the child's eyes cry louder than the parent's screams. The only different colour, red (I chakra, earthly rootedness, self preservation), is the surfboard, gently floating on waves* (*that is, water, that is, blue, communication).
    This is what I saw.
    Apart from any personal view,
    this is a poetic work.
  • Corrie Jones 1 year ago
    Thanks so much Chiara!
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  • Cameron Crisp plus 1 year ago
    So emotionally charged and beautifully made. Great work to all the crew involved on this magnificent piece.
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  • Lorene Amet plus 1 year ago
    This film would have “felt” a lot more real if it had portrait the relationship between a child and his disabled sibling rather than his disabled parent. In the UK, and I expect in many other countries where a social care system is in place, a parent presenting with even minute evidence, from a mental health point of view, of not being able to carry his parental duty, will have his child taken away to a care home. Equally, disabled adults as severe as the person presented here, tend to be cared for in institutions rather than at home. Therefore the psychological drama that has been created here seems contrived, as if wanting to seek a boosted emotional response from the viewers. Do people really need that extra boost to appreciate a production, especially when the film quality is that good? The issue of guilt and early responsibility experienced by a child, his loneliness and isolation could have been covered without these artifices. Equally, covering the true face of living with someone who is disabled could have been a lot more authentic and thus be more helpful.
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  • mpared plus 1 year ago
    lovely stuff it up at the curious brain :-)
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  • Jens Karlsson 1 year ago
    I totally love the film, the slow pace, the acting and the beautiful pictures. Usually I do not like open ended movies like this one. I sometimes feel as if the movie maker is not "taking responsibility" when only suggesting a dreaded end and leaving it to my imagination to create a young murderer. But after some thinking I realise that the film has made me get closer to feelings of frustration, love and anger than I do going about my daily life. Then it is less important if the boy follows through with his act of compassion or not, I have come closer to MY emotional response to a dilemma similar to the boy’s. And how could I NOT love the film when it makes my heart come close to bursting and my eyes fills up with tears.

    Thanks
  • Corrie Jones 1 year ago
    Thanks Jens.
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  • Pete Johnston 1 year ago
    WOW! I'm speechless.
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  • Luis Fonseca 1 year ago
    Excelent directing and acting.
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  • wow is all i can say. Amazing job man, very inspiring for me as an actor to see such brilliant performances all around
  • Corrie Jones 1 year ago
    Thanks. That means a lot Christopher.
  • christopher piccione 11 months ago
    You're welcome man. I just watched your other short "Victim"
    Amazing.

    Like I said before, very inspiring for me as an actor and now for me behind the camera. Just started writing/acting/directing a few of my own shorts.

    I will be sure to keep an eye out for your future work!
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  • Edgars Trankalis 1 year ago
    watch this-- vimeo.com/17003359
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  • Adn Memb 1 year ago
    Beautiful piece of work. Hats off to everybody involved in this project, especially the Director of Photography, as this is what touched me the most.

    At the beginning I had trouble understanding what language the characters were speaking (i'm a non native english person) but i catched the most important things.

    It is for this kind of things, discovering such beautiful pieces of art, that i like coming to vimeo even though i'm really not into video myself.

    Blogged (and share on Facebook and Twitter) here : adnmemb.tumblr.com/post/1620084422/water-is-a-film-about-a-young-boys-struggle-to
  • Corrie Jones 1 year ago
    Thanks for sharing my film with others ;)
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  • Meat Bingo plus 1 year ago
    This is a brave film - both gruelling and beautiful. The ambiguity of the ending only attests to the turmoil of the son - we can all be guilty of dark longings, but the poetry of the visual images suggests we are capable of more than this. Awesome.
  • Corrie Jones 1 year ago
    Thanks Meat!
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  • uneexpo 1 year ago
    Superbe film, bravo ! ! ! ! !
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  • Hey Corrie!
    You´re such a great Director.
    The ending is so great, my heartbeating couldn´t stop.
    The glanze, the silence, the rage, the sadness, the anger, the love, the doubt, all at the same in just a few seconds.
    Great movie, man.
    Thanks for sharing it.

    Best
  • Corrie Jones 1 year ago
    Thanks so much for the compliment Pablo.
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  • love this movie, well done ,has a great emotional value and deserves applause by a big audience
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  • YN3 1 year ago
    Отлично, жизненно. Спасибо. :)
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  • Alicia Wiggin 1 year ago
    fantastic piece of work.
    im not well-versed in movies or cinematography, but finding a beautiful piece- both the filming and the story portrayed- was wonderful.
    reminded me (maybe by way of filming- or maybe the absence of tons of dialogue) of a film- Bella.
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  • CAMEO. plus 1 year ago
    this short is beautiful, straight beautiful.
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  • deep and sensitive piece
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  • Lisa Dellugat 1 year ago
    One of the best short film I have ever seen. Congrats!
  • Corrie Jones 1 year ago
    Thanks Lisa!
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  • Robinson Portraits 1 year ago
    That was one of the most amazing shorts i've seen in a long time. Well done!
  • Corrie Jones 1 year ago
    Thanks Robinson! That means a lot.
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  • Charly G. 1 year ago
    Omg I though this was a boring story... but i was so wrong.... I was amazed by it... and i don't want to know what was the end of it.... This deserves to be seen by millions of people.
  • Corrie Jones 1 year ago
    Thanks Charly. I'm really glad the film surprised you.
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  • Aaron Bannasch plus 1 year ago
    Storytelling at its finest. Thank you for this superb film.
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  • Markus 1 year ago
    I still don't know who the caregiver is. Is it a nurse who just happened to surf with the boy's dad? Anyway, i could really empathize what he went through when screaming at the father to shut up.
    I really liked the following scene when Toby started to realise that he's not the only one who feels helpless sometimes.

    Really nice work.
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  • Yashu 1 year ago
    Thank you for this film, to show this with such reallity and rightness.
    Thanks a lot.
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  • Robby Cornish 1 year ago
    wow. great film.
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  • Jai Ganesh 1 year ago
    Awesome movie...

    Have blogged it @ shortfilmshub.com/2010/11/23/water-award-winner/
  • Corrie Jones 1 year ago
    Thanks for sharing the film further. I appreciate it.
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  • ricksaunders 1 year ago
    Wow. THIS is why I LOVE Vimeo. Powerful film, sir. Cheers. Posting to ricksaunders.blogspot.com/
  • Corrie Jones 1 year ago
    Thanks Rick.
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  • Chavela De 1 year ago
    Congratulations Corrie and mates!

    I've just watched it and i did loved it. Not only the film from a cinamatographic point of view (photography, actors, location....) but mainly for the way you treat such a subject as a child and an adult daily life with a disable person. I think it is beautifully and very realistically treated. I´ve read a comment made by the father of an autistic father. I can undersand him but don´t agree with him. You can tell by watching the movie it is about someone who suffered an accident which lead him to that situation. Rarelly I've watched movies or documentals that treat these subjects as closer as I feel this matter. I have to brothers who are mental disable and the way this boy felt remind me of myself when i was a kid. Confussion and mixted emotions which are difficult to share or comunicate. Your movie achieves this in only 16 minutes. Thanks
  • Corrie Jones 1 year ago
    Thanks Chavela. Your comments really mean a lot! And I'm really glad you felt the film was honest to your own experiences. Thanks again!
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  • NOME fiLmes plus 1 year ago
    Congratulations Corrie¡
    Just like Chavela, I usually get first inmersed into the cinematographic stuff...but within a minute i started to get involved with the little boy and started to think all about his subjectivity in the matter of his dad being a mentally disabled adult. Got me really thinking. I was tense all the time (not a thriller movie tense), more like an emotional tense.
    Anyways, you and you team did an amazing work. Congrats¡
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  • Jeroen Diderik 1 year ago
    .... that made me silent for quite a while, feeling tears rolling down my cheeks...

    You have totally overwhelmed me with your short. And I only just stumbled into it by looking at todays Staff Picks on this site.

    I hope your short will be presented on the International Film Festival Rotterdam in the Netherlands next year January, since I feel this is one that needs to be shared!!! I will certainly share it with all that are willing to watch it.

    Thank you Corrie (and crew) for making this one!
  • Corrie Jones 1 year ago
    Thanks Jeroen. I would've loved for 'Water' to screen as part of the International Film Festival Rotterdam, but unfortunately it wasn't accepted. Thank you for your compliments thoughts. I really appreciate it.
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  • Sulabh Bista 1 year ago
    Life is not always blooming flowers, moving clouds, setting suns and sunny days. Life is sometimes as remorse as something shown in this short movie: a great portray of the another side of life.

    Thanks for making such a great movie.
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  • Sam Ellens 1 year ago
    Very, very impressive. Love the ending.
  • Corrie Jones 1 year ago
    Cheers Sam!
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