thats great

Oh I so wanna play this.

this is awesome. blogged about it : catto.co.za/post/54830577/unfinished-swan

THIS IS AWESOME. I saw it on the IndieCade site and it was the best idea on there and possibly the best I've seen in a long time. To do so much with so little.... wow.

I was once blind but now I see.

When, how, where can I play it?

I was actually a little apprehensive as we shifted into the darkness. Really great little video.

great! like a blindness :D

grandioso y buena idea

cool

i'm really impressed actually
it's really nice to see innovation in fps
hope development keeps going strong, i'd love to play it when it's all finished!
keep us posted <3

Wow, I liked that a lot.. Looks very interesting.. What system is it going to be available on?

Great idea, well done. Good luck with expanding it out.

Good stuff. It's funny, I actually anticipated the transition from white to black

what a cool idea.

stunning.

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I got scared at one point.

very cool concept! *likes*

Oh man, can't wait to try this out! And please, pretty please, capitalize on sound design as much as humanly possible in this. Some of the ambient audio in this video really, really worked. The aesthetic could lend itself to any mood, depending on the sound design... not to mention the objects the player ends up revealing...

woo

I like the idea. Keep it up!

great idea for a game :)

amazing!

To be good, if you create a game where it will be necessary to bombard the wall to go through a maze.

awesome!!!! I love the background soundscapes. The popping sound for the ball kind of cheezified it a little bit, but all in all an impressive venture to new aesthetics for gaming.

blogging this on lovelifewith.us

very cool.

This is quite unnerving. I want to play it.

**YES!**

The aesthetics are beautiful, concept is novel, and potential is large.

I second other comments on the sound. The ambient soundscape is perfect. The popping sound effect is a bit incongruous and distracting... though the gun sounds in the black realm seem more in the right direction.

What struck me in the black realm, with the white "window" silhouettes, is the shear potential in this game for messing with depth perception. Those 'windows' could have been far away or near (as in fake, very small square grids on a wall), with no possibility to tell aside from shooting in the direction. I sense that aspect could be a unique opportunity to build upon in creating disorienting levels.

Keep up the great work!

Beautiful.

I'm ready for some beta testing!

brilliant idea!

Beautiful work. Nice use of perspective and space. Love the high contrast effect. The sound worked for me, made it really interactive.

Clever!

This is really conceptually wonderful. Like dark white concept.

i
need
this

That looks awesome!!

Great! Now please get it finished. Love the sound.

susanfitzgerald.com/blog/2008/11/09/the-unfinished-swan/

That is just frikkin awesome

Original. Must be possible to create some really scary scenes. Imagine a monster jumping out in front of you.

Really cool

Glad that somebody still take out new ideas :)

i feel like i have sticky paint on my feet!

oh, I really like it, creepy and clever!

Awesome!

excelent! I want to play it.

so great !

What a sweet UI

WOW!,,, thats SWEET!
LOVE to see a First Person Shooter like that.
Mad Sin City abstract business.

as an Architect in Training. I feel this isn't just a game but a powerful tool to allow clients to understand concepts of the depth of an architectural space.... Big Ups on Architectural Suspense!

art!

One of the games I'm most excited about, the potential is staggering. Especially the text on the floor you saw and the music...so creepy. I'd buy this game in an instant.

wow ~ so great @@

Nice trip )

I wanna play!!!

So cool!

Incredible. Best most mysterious game that reaches in the 'freak' in me.

I ink, therefore I am.

Love the simplicity.

This is so amazing, i want to be in this..right now.

kewl!! love it!!

beautiful, scary, great!

can't wait to play this game :)

wow ! love it... !

Amazing idea!