A short piece I recently directed

This is not the completed version as I still wish to make some changes in post.
I am quite happy with the final act however the scenes from the middle of the piece could have been improved with some more time to film I feel.

Any constructive criticisms or advice would be welcome so that I can improve the piece.

Shot on : Sony EX3 and Canon 5d mark ii

Edited with : Final cut pro

Director: Krishna Muthurangu
Producer: Krishna Muthurangu
DOP: Krishna Muthurangu
Camera operator: Krishna Muthurangu
Additional camera operator: Jamie Adair
Grips: Adam Thirtle, Thomas Whittle and Jonny Haynes