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38. Egypt: After The Revolution
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Documentary shot on the Canon 5D Mark II with Zeiss Compact Prime Lenses in Egypt after the revolution in March 2011. Pyramid time-lapse bought as stock footage from pond5.com/

Edited in Adobe Premiere Pro CS5 with Magic Bullet Mojo

Music purchased from shockwave-sound.com/

Blog article on the Production scatteredimages.co.uk/2011/04/29/after-the-revolution/

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  • Tyler Brain plus 9 months ago
    Lighting, framing and audio on interviewees is excellent for found light. Very well done. Looks like those Zeiss lenses have great bokeh.

    Interesting use of B&W and grain to juxtapose the revolution footage with post-revolution.

    Can you perhaps speak to your reasoning behind that?

    Seems interesting to me considering that the overall message of the film is that the thread of suppressed emotion that started the revolution still remains - remains and is in tension with rebuilding a functional democratic infrastructure.

    Overall - another example of why I subscribe to the Staff blog. Well done.
  • Marty Stalker plus 9 months ago
    Cheers Tyler and thanks for the feedback.

    My main aim with the flash back and present day scenes was to make a contrast with the situation at Tahrir square, then and now. Since the curfew has been put in place in the country it's a very eerie place to be since the revolution. During the day, the square is filled again with Egyptians but this time, they go about their daily business, charred buildings and only a few banners remain as remnants of the uprising that took place weeks prior.
  • nathan nguyen-le 4 months ago
    seems like memento
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  • Ben J Hutchison plus 9 months ago
    Great stuff! It definitely has a frontline vibe to it. Congrats.
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  • Matt Young 9 months ago
    I love the opening, lovely mix of strong visuals and crowd noise with the calm music. A very well made doc, kudos!

    DSLRs are THE tool for documentary film making, as demonstrated here, beautifully.
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  • sven 9 months ago
    So strange to see the square empty... I was there the 11 feb and it was just wonderful.
    Thank you for the movie
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  • Takayuki Akachi plus 9 months ago
    Great! Go Egypt.
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  • galeocerdo 9 months ago
    Great Work!
    Just a question: werw did you find this wonderful music?
    Thanks
  • Marty Stalker plus 9 months ago
    Thanks for asking- I've now amended the description. I buy most of my music from shockwave-sound.com/

    Very high quality royalty free music
  • MerDoc 9 months ago
    awesome! may I know what's the name of this music? It goes perfectly with your footage.
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  • amjad el-geoushi 9 months ago
    Hi Marty
    I'm gonna watch this a few more times, but I'm seeing something here that may cause misunderstanding, most of your interviews are with AUC students, I don't think the revolutuion was born out of the AUC or it's students, this was a youth movement. your first young AUC student went out on the 28th, things kicked off a bit earlier on the 25th, you may know that on the day things got pretty nasty when the government let it's thugs on the square during and after the "Camel" incident, a band of determined young men saved the square from being over run, things could have ended there had it not been for them, and I don't think they were from the AUC. I just wanted to point out that your film may intentionally or not elude to that.
    all the best
  • Marty Stalker plus 9 months ago
    Hi Amjad, thanks for your comment and I totally understand your point.

    I really wish I had longer in country to interview more people. Although it isn't a great excuse, I had such a tight time schedule in Egypt that I couldn't physically get around everybody.
  • Oliver Wilkins plus 9 months ago
    Great film, technically really excellent and I'm blown away by it stylistically.

    However I have to agree with Amjad. AUC tuition fees can be up to $13,000 per semester. Tomorrow in Tahrir factory workers and unions will march to try and raise the minimum wage from $70 per month. Corruption of the old regime landed the country's resources and money in the hands of an elite few and their children went to the AUC.

    Sorry to bring up the point again.

    Love the film and love the shots of the Sufi's in Hussein. Very atmospheric.
  • Marty Stalker plus 9 months ago
    Hi Oliver, thanks for the feedback on the video, it's much appreciated and I take your points on board.
  • Andario 9 months ago
    Wow, $13,000 per semester?? Considering the average salaries, that makes Harvard feel like a real bargain...
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  • حكيم عيون 9 months ago
    It's really a nice clip shows different people views towards Revolution!
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  • Dominic Veljanovski 9 months ago
    Beautiful photography, really looks wonderful.

    Overall I think the music pushes the pace to much, really gets in the way. The subtitles are a bit of an insult to the audience too, every subject is perfectly understandable.

    Wonderful looking film otherwise!
  • Marty Stalker plus 9 months ago
    Hi Dominic, thanks for your feedback, it's appreciated. I agree with you about the subtitles but after watching the first draft of the doc my clients wanted subtitles inserted. Whatever the clients want they get and I wasn't going to argue with them. This is why it's great showcasing my work here on Vimeo. I've been receiving some great constructive feedback and will use all points brought up for my next piece.
  • Dominic Veljanovski 9 months ago
    No worries. The client is always right! Interesting you should mention it, I was thinking just last night about how good of a community we have here at Vimeo. Look forward to seeing some more, the images you've posted are wonderful!
  • Claudio Hütte 9 months ago
    I think subtitles are really useful indeed. You should consider those who have a scarce capability to understand spoken english, and those who are not able to hear as well!
    Subtitles render your work more accessible, and respectful for those with limited capabilities.
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  • Justin Mansfield 9 months ago
    This is well done. It seems to me that the audio is a bit off (not perfectly synced) on some of the interviews.
  • Marty Stalker plus 9 months ago
    Yep, good ears and eyes! I had a few issues on upload, source video is synced perfectly but for some reason it's a few frames out with the audio once it was uploaded.
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  • Claudio Hütte 9 months ago
    Good job and interesting perspectives. Your documentary gives confirm of what some political observers thought just the day after the end of the egyptian revolution.
    Thank you for posting.

    About the work you done, the only thing I think is not well performed are some audio recording in the interviews. The sound is somewhat too stereo-spaced, lacks of presence, and reflections are clearly audible, disturbing a little the intelleggibility of the speech. It seems that microphone is too far from the speaker.
    That apart, great work! Photography, story, and editing is really well done for my taste.
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  • this is very nicely done and i applaud you for addressing some of the challenges facing egypt now. the situation is at once disturbing, exciting, tense, and exhilarating, and you have captured some of that complexity.

    yet, in addition to all your interviewees being affiliated with auc, i found your stereotypical introduction so off-putting that it was hard for me to take the rest of the film seriously. egypt remained unchanged for millennia and then "suddenly" exploded on january 25? given your feel for some of the complexities in egypt now, i am shocked that your intro is so out of touch with any notion of reality.

    and although i found it slightly odd, especially in the overall context of the film and in juxtaposition to the auc interviews, i did enjoy your sufi footage...

    cheers!
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  • Alain Deckers 9 months ago
    I really liked this documentary. Provides a nice counterpoint to the usual fare that portrays muslim societies as just a bunch of bearded zealots. Would have been good to have some more interviewees from outside the AUC. I had the same reaction as Jennifer Peterson concerning the intro.
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  • Mahmod 9 months ago
    I liked the film , but you still have some sound and tripod stability issues, and the main Note in my opinion is for a very big title like the Egyptian Rev. i think a harder Rhythm could be done for the film .. what i liked most was the timelapsing of the Pyramids at the middle of film ..
    thanks a lot
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  • Mahmod 9 months ago
    and by the way .. the comments up there are very valuable :)
  • Marty Stalker plus 9 months ago
    No problem Mahmod thanks for the constructive feedback :)
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  • De Rienzo Films plus 9 months ago
    Awesome work in my humble opinion! Absolutely love this from a technical, informative and story driven view.
  • Marty Stalker plus 9 months ago
    Cheers mate, I always appreciate your feedback
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  • Greg Barker plus 9 months ago
    Hi Marty. Your Sudan footage from your Birth of a Nation was incredible. You made a comment there that the 35mm CP.2 required you to be a little too intrusive. It looks like you may have taken advantage of the 85mm for this piece and I'm currently trying to decide between the two. Do you have a preference for the doc work you're doing yet. Thought 85mm handheld might be a little rough with no IS. Interested in your thoughts.
  • Marty Stalker plus 9 months ago
    Hi Gregg, I would recommend the 35mm CP.2 lens first as it gives you more range in your documentary work but with obvious limitations. The 85mm is great for controlled interview environments and gives you beautiful shallow DOF. You can achieve a 50mm look by moving the camera and 35mm lens closer to the subject but is very intrusive as you have heard from my Sudan trip. I would opt for the 35mm first but it's your decision mate :)
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  • Patrick Tierney 8 months ago
    hey Marty...
    images look amazing ...did you do much colour corection? the blacks look superb

    did you use a steadycam or just tripod ?
  • Marty Stalker plus 8 months ago
    Hi Patrick I used magic bullet Mojo for the colour grade, but the secret lies in the Tiffen pro mist filter that I use in the matte box. It really darkens the blacks even before you apply any colour grading. Tripod work due to the fast paced and sometimes spontaneous world of documentary filmmaking (especially in the Middle East). By the time you've balanced the camera on your steadicam you've missed the shot :)
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  • Rocco Ruizgomar 5 months ago
    Great Doc...5dmk2 & CP.2 Lenses. Really looks incredible.... framing, composition, rack focus, color, timing... AHO!
  • Marty Stalker plus 3 months ago
    Thanks Rocco!
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  • Peter Schagen plus 3 months ago
    great documentary Marty. Nice job!
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  • Marty Stalker plus 3 months ago
    Thanks Peter!
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  • Omar Nabulsi 4 days ago
    Very impressive! Thank you.
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