Clean Up (Project: Direct entry)
1 year ago
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7. Clean Up (Project: Direct entry)
1 year ago
A short film we completed in about 16 hours for the YouTube Project: Direct challenge. Directed by Bryan Harley, written by Roque Rodriguez, starring Adrian Rodriguez.
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The beginning seemed a bit underexposed, though there are visual gems throughout the project. The camera work is very good.
Even for the subject matter, I thought the pacing was a bit slow. I didn't have a problem with holding on shots for long periods of time. The shot with the remote in the foreground was beautiful. The voice over slowed things down a bit too much.
It's good work, so continue to make more.