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7. Tomé Storyworld: Introduction
6 months ago
5. Ronny Key Roof
1 year ago
2. Antonio
3 years ago
1. Los Danzares
4 years ago
In a forgotten island-nation — at an artistic hub in the unlikeliest of places — a group of talented painters dream of showcasing their work around the world.

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  • Chithra Jeyaram plus 6 months ago
    Comments on trailer. The visuals and art work on very engaging. When the artist speaks - i can either read the subtitle or watch the movie. I had to watch it twice once to read and once to see. So less talking, telling. Use subtitles only when necessary and make it easy to read (focus on font size, placement and duration).
    There are too many characters for us to connect with, I want to be vested in the talented painter and his journey and want to see the world through his eyes and words. The trailer needs to answer the following question: Why is this film being made, why this artist and why should the viewer care.
  • oneohone 2 months ago
    I'm guessing you don't watch foreign films...
  • Kris Haamer 2 months ago
    No, but she's right. The timing of the text is way off. If you understand the spoken word in Portuguese you'll see there's no rhythm and power in the text.. another thing is the music doesn't underline or enforce the message now. It sort of just hangs in the background. Lots to do better..
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  • Du Hoang 3 months ago
    Just saw the trailer. Very impressive. Look like a professional job. Congrats, Kris.
  • Kris Haamer 2 months ago
    Thanks. Hopefully I can get a more engaging trailer by Feb so I can release the project on Kickstarter. I've it in draft mode now cause I don't think its powerful enough to get people to contribute..
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  • Kaysha 2 months ago
    Beautiful
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  • Leandro Ferrão 2 months ago
    great job
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