
Laws of Simplicity
10 months ago
These are the customer reviews that were posted to Amazon's page for John Maeda's book, The Laws of Simplicity. The comments appear here in the same order that the comments were posted on Amazon.
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Ellen Lupton 10 months agoWow, this is hugely better! All the changes that you made have contributed to a strong piece. Making the lollipop go away, adding sound, simplifying the overall screen layout, and simplifying the color scheme--all good decisions. If you are making any more changes, you might consider giving a different "sound" to each of the five ratings, so that the sound emphasizes what's happening on the screen rather than merely being a background. -
Andrew Shea
4 months ago Thanks for this, Ellen. I just finished my final version of this piece which incorporates your advice about the sound and the feedback that some others gave me. -
brockett horne 10 months agogreat way to respond to class feedback. your solution and your skills have exponentially grown. I find the final piece compelling on a number of levels and might only recommend a more conclusive ending.
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