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Short film shot on the Nikon D90

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Martin Haasdijk
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tokbandit 9 months ago

nice boom mic in the reflection of the tv....
Eugenia Loli-Queru 9 months ago

Hmm... I am a big fan of yours, you know that. Your "Rainy Day" is my favorite HV video of all time (and I have watched thousands of them).

But this, this was sloppy. It isn't you. The editing was sloppy, the filming was sloppy, the audio sync, and grading. I know that you can do much better than that.
Batteryfire 9 months ago

Thanks for the input Eugenia. It was for a contest, so I rushed it to meet the deadline. Now that I have time I'll try and fix it up a bit and re-upload.
Eugenia Loli-Queru 9 months ago

Sounds good, thanks! I can't wait to see the new cut! :)
Disdausdebil 9 months ago

very good job man! really entertaining. story and cut are great!
..and don't mind.. eugenia is one of those persons who just pay attention on quality and not on story..
Eugenia Loli-Queru 9 months ago

I pay attention on both. Filming is about both the technical aspect and the story aspect. If it was just the story aspect, we would still only have live theater.
Disdausdebil 9 months ago

yeah... you're right but i think videos should entertain you. Thats why plattforms like youtube are so successful.. and theater is just a form of entertaining, film is another. with film you can express so much more and i think as long as a movie can keep you watching it is good. to say a movie is bad because the cc is sloppy is just superficial..
Vicente Gil Ginestar 9 months ago

Hi,

Good look. What lens you used?

Thanks.
Batteryfire 9 months ago

Thanks.

Nikon DX 18-70mm
Tokina DX 12-24mm
Vicente Gil Ginestar 9 months ago

They look great. Thank you very much.
Paul Moore 9 months ago

I can tell the flannery O'conner influence (Good Country People) in this short.
Batteryfire 9 months ago

I've been told that twice, but I've never read it. Maybe I should! :)
Aaron Malsbury 8 months ago

I can see a little that could be improved, but "sloppy" I think that's a little rough, the guy used a freakin digital camera for pete's sake, give sake. or girl sorry.
Anthony Johnson 8 months ago

story was ok...

some pretty nice shots :-)

well done mr fire .. or can i call you battery ?

:-)
Dan Rogers 8 months ago

nice stuff! I am going to get the new Rebel they just announced that has video! woot
►Alex Leahu◄ 7 months ago

I liked the story.
LRC 7 months ago

lol... not bad but I would of used After Effects to take the boom pole & mic out of the TV screen.
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Jared Samuel 5 months ago

The video was decent, and I don't know what the competition was...

But you should go deeper with the story. I'm not saying for THIS video, this video is fine.

I'm saying you should create a longer version, with a story, so the audience can feel for the old guy, and get to know his character better.

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