I agree, this video is really awesome! Nice production work..

that's an interesting idea, greg. :)

This was a fantastic concept. Very creative.

And I think Greg is definitely onto something. As good as your footage is, I don’t think it’s quite strong enough to stand on it's own for the entire 7:11 of the song, you know what I mean? It definitely starts to get... uhhh... well, a little predictable. Fantastic… but predictable.

It seems to me that your video has some serious potential. But I think you need to add to your existing concept with something like what Greg suggested above. But be sure to do some good pre-production planning based on this great footage you already have. Then shoot whatever you come up with, and then inter-cut them together based on that next-level concept.

Speaking as an editor, I think there are some genuinely powerful moments in your original footage that you can easily manipulate the timing of, once you cut into them with editing. I think adding some “POV” shots will work really well. But if I was your editor, I would really want some footage of you singing the song, visibly working through the emotions of “falling through” and what that means to you.

Good work!

:) that is me - i am the only one i know who is willing to endure something like this for free.

ahahah.. lol.. yeah, i suppose it's not so easy to find who'd like to do that.. :D

hanging off of the apex of the roof.

I agree... ;-))

thank you!