Good work. I suggest breaking the sentence to two more contrasting phrases.
The first (up to "...and, uh...") should be just a guy buying Huggies, and the second should be a with a more concerned face looking around. You can also hold the gun behind his back for the first phrase and only pull it out in hte second.
Thanks for the comment Alex, big fan of your work! I need to check my vimeo more often cause it says u posted this like 4 months ago, But I guess thats proof of the long hours I been working :)
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The first (up to "...and, uh...") should be just a guy buying Huggies, and the second should be a with a more concerned face looking around. You can also hold the gun behind his back for the first phrase and only pull it out in hte second.