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A struggling writer attempts to complete his screenplay, but is interrupted by two unexpected visitors who may not have his best intentions in mind.

Created for the "Writer's Block " fight for FilmFights.com. Vote for it!

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  • Kevin Mosley plus 8 months ago
    The last shot is really hot.
  • justin plus 8 months ago
    Hah ---- awesome. and kind of creepy
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  • ChriZZZ Emerson 8 months ago
    Reminds me of a twilight zone i saw once.
  • justin plus 8 months ago
    Yah? What was the basic premise of that? Maybe Mike was inspired subconsciously
  • ChriZZZ Emerson 8 months ago
    in it a man is being tormented because he finds that he is the character in a novel. everything that happens to the man in the book happens to him in real life. he buys the book so that he can tell what will happen next and people keep trying to kill him. so he goes to the writers house and tells him to write another book. one where instead of him dying, he wakes up in his bed and it is all a dream. then he shoots himself. the writer never writes this book, and as he is driving home one night his car brakes down. when he checks under the hood he finds that one of the valves has been clogged with a page. he uncrumples it and it say something like "if the writer had not been so confused by the words on the page, he might have heard the man with the axe coming up behind him" AAAAHHHHH!!!!! and of course he gets hacked to death.


    i think it was a twitlight zone, it was some show like that.
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  • Weker One 8 months ago
    I really Liked that, Could be a lot longer with out getting old!
  • justin plus 8 months ago
    Thanks dude! Maybe someday we'll turn it into a feature .....
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  • Garett Gioia 8 months ago
    that was bona fide awesomeness. at the end, steve reminded me of the dad from coraline. :]
  • justin plus 8 months ago
    Haha, that's funny, I can see that
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  • Chris Grajeda 8 months ago
    So you mentioned the "little mini-jack HV30 mic" in FilmFights. Did you by any chance use one here?

    I wanna see this mini-jack in action.
  • Chris Grajeda 8 months ago
    Actually, I wanna hear it in action lol.
  • justin plus 8 months ago
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  • Chuck Calhoun. 8 months ago
    awesome, I like the ending a lot.
  • justin plus 8 months ago
    Thank ya chuck - chalk that up to great script from Michael
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  • Allen Huerta 8 months ago
    Justin Love the film hahah Some of the things Cynthia throws out are the best... I should go review this on FF...
  • justin plus 8 months ago
    yes do! I'd love a FF review!
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  • Heather Rose 8 months ago
    Justin I am watching your movie now -- but I am not reviewing it officially because there may be a review show in the works.... in the event of that falling through -- I will give you a full review. It's really cool you entered this fight, too.
  • justin plus 8 months ago
    Ooohh snap! REVIEW SHOW! I would LOVE THAT!
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  • Mr. Johnson 8 months ago
    Hey I wrote and was in this!
  • justin plus 8 months ago
    Where did you put michael?!!?!
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  • Kaleb Thomas 8 months ago
    That was great. I've always wondered how somebody could write a short about somebody writing a script, and put it off without being lame. You beat me to it though. I liked it a lot!
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  • AbOwLoFsUnShInE! 8 months ago
    haha i love the part where she's like
    "umm how do you feel about stds?"
    haha
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  • Remi NoĆ«ll plus 8 months ago
    Really cool!
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  • Jake Strunk 8 months ago
    i'm pregnant with a pregnant baby

    ahahahahaha

    very clever and very hilarious
  • justin plus 7 months ago
    It happens!
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  • 35[HD] 6 months ago
    Good job. The red pointy gun nozel [LOL]!
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  • Jesse Garrard 5 months ago
    That was hilarious and awesome at the same time! I liked the pull focus on the last scene, but I didn't like the orange gun tip.
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