Advanced Doc ROUGH cut 1

Name: Advanced Doc ROUGH cut 1
Uploaded: 2009-04-08T20:00:16+00:00
Duration: 6 min 27 s
Channel: chixwithtrix
Description: rough cut 1 needs a lot of editing and smoothing out. Will be taking away talking head and putting in more other footage, just ran out of time and threw in some b-roll. I know some shots are repeated, the characters have no identification bars, etc. Like I said, its rough. Looking for where the story is weak/strong or good/bad visuals, etc.

rough cut 1 needs a lot of editing and smoothing out. Will be taking away talking head and putting in more other footage, just ran out of time and threw in some b-roll.   I know some shots are repeated, the characters have no identification bars, etc. Like I said, its rough. Looking for where the story is weak/strong or good/bad visuals, etc.