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An unsuspecting couple finds a strange woman in their apartment and decide to take matters into their own hands. But, why is she there?
  • Jonathan Aldebot plus 7 months ago
    Hey thanks for the comment. We used a Audi Technica AT877
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  • Lee Bryant plus 6 months ago
    Haha, another good one.

    Do you make these just for fun? The dialogue is really good. Actually everything was very good. The only thing I didn't care for was some of the titles. I think the story would still make perfect sense without them. Like the ones at 1:28/2:08.

    Either way, great job.
  • Jonathan Aldebot plus 6 months ago
    Thanks Lee! Yea, for the most these are done for fun for the moment with plans to do more serious stuff soon. As far as title cards, i didn't want to use them, however, i forgot a shot and had to use something in its place, hence, i had to use title cards to avoid an obvious jump cut :)
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  • Paul Varricchione 6 months ago
    totally awesome! very professional. great dialogue. acting was very very good. girlfriend 1 really reminds me of Jennifer Lopez. how do you do your over the shoulder dialouge scenes? do you shoot one side of the conversation then the other and edit it in post? I'm thinking about doing a short and always wondered what the best way to do this was.
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  • Jonathan Aldebot plus 6 months ago
    hey thanks for the kind words! j-lo? nah, lol. that's exactly how i do over shoulder, film the entire scene with the cam facing one actor (sometimes with more than one angle just in case) then do the reverse and edit in post. really simple actually. worse thing you can do, I think, is to shoot a line, the pick up your tripod and face it the other direction and so on and so on... way too much time wasted, not to mention you will probably break out in a sweat! :)
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  • Steve Struthers 6 months ago
    LOL. This was pretty funny actually. My favourite part was where the girlfriend breaks out the knives, and the boyfriend looks askance at her and then she says, "We have to confront her..." LOL. Good work.
  • Jonathan Aldebot plus 5 months ago
    thanks steve!
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