very impressive..great shots, music, editing..what did you use for color correction?

hey, the music at the end is a brazilian song, what´s the name of the artist?

1:20 min end titles?! you must be kidding.
This is 1/3 of movie itself.... not good

the lighting is like perfect.

I think the music became a little invasive at times, but it was well shot, and the concept interesting.

you've created an awesome mood! well done! editcrunch.co.uk

Sorry, but not my cup of tea at all. While there were some positive aspects like the lighting, framing, etc., I found I was clicking ahead to speed it up..

I couldn't wait for it to end.

Wow great job.

C'est diablement bien filmé. L'atmosphère d'oppression est très réussie. Bravo même si on aurait aimé que ce soit quand même un poil plus long.

Good photography and music!

good job. not as good as this short film:
vimeo.com/4832309

wow you should totally never add that ending and dont tell people what it really is! the unknown is so much more creepier!

quite boring film except few shots..

the shot looking up the stairs is amazing

Oh!

so what is it about?

really great editing and cinematography. I thought that the music might have been just a little too intense at times, but it was wonderful otherwise. I definitely think you should go back and and get the end shots to finish this up.

The lighting is excellent but i di agree that the music is invasive! But for sure finish it!

Wow! I'm shocked! So many comments in such a short time!
Thank you so much, and sorry to be late to reply you.
About the project, me and my friend Coady decided to make this short after studying cinematography for a while. We got access to an old abandoned corporate dormitory near our house and decided to shoot there. The place was amazing but we had only a few days to shoot there and it had to be in that week. We didn't have the screenplay finished at the moment and had to hurry to get the shots. Well end result is, we didn't get everything we wanted and the story was broken.Our audio hard drive broke and we lost all the boom audio!
So just for the sake of not loosing the project, I put everything we got together and made this. So I understand if people get frustrated when watching this, you can't imagine my own frustration!
But if I get compliments about anything besides the story, I'm more then happy!
Shot with a Sony FX1 with an M2 adapter and Nikon lenses. Lighting 4x500w halogen and a 1k par light.
Cut in Adobe Premiere, effects and compositing in Adobe After effects.

Very well done cinematography and lighting (plus post). I understand your frustration and the time restriction. Try to finish your short film, I'm sure you can find another location and rewrite the ending to the new location. Then you also can shorten the scene where his head sticks to the wall for (like a minute?) a loooong time, that's the only thing I didn't like. : )

i love the coloring of the film. very dramatic

how can the video be downloaded:)?

very nice , the lightning, the filming.
the depth, everything. i like it very much.
you've inspired me to begin with mine her in suriname

WOW..This is Amazing... Would you want to come to Ghana - Africa to pursue a full time Production Career? Hala...Well Done!

Did you colour corrected footage?

Very nice. Good atmosphere, and very cool colour grading. Well done!

This is a very impressive short. The music, editing, the lighting was good too. What was it shot on?

Imagine if you switch to flash back of some scary of sort. Good job for this particular scene. Good sharing.

that was tight!
the coloring, hte lighting, the editing!
Everything! From the shots all the way down to the sound. you guys got it down.
Good job!

I did a similar piece a few years back, a guy living in his own world turns out to be in isolation room in some mental hospital.

I had the vision of mixing it up like this,
but came nowhere close! haha
Kudos man!

WOOW!!!
GORGEOURS!!!!
I love ur lighting, script, and all...
But ur edition and music effects...woow!!!
Great job!!!
seeya!
and if u r curious:
Dizem Que EU Sou Louco:
vimeo.com/4682677
Nas Mãos de Deus
vimeo.com/4303575
THANKS!!

Well, I know absolutely nothing about lighting, blue stuff, and the rest, but I really enjoyed this film. Creepy, for sure; it certainly kept my attention. Good job!

Great stuff!

Lovely camera angles, I think the effects and the colour of the whole video is fantastic!

Youps sorry for using french. I wasn't sure of my english level. So I wanted to compliment you for your short film which I really have apprecated. We can easily feel the opression atmosphere. I also enjoy the shots you have chosen for your film. The only thing I regret is that it was maybe too short. Anyway I expect your next production with impatience.

Weak story/script, but good lighting and coloring

Wonderfully photographed! You should definitely finish off the film with the ending you wanted. The ending at the moment feels like the film simply trailing off needlessly, it definitely needs a proper ending as the rest of the film feels like it's building up to something.

the music was perfect.

this is amazing. got a great future ahead of you.

What Camera did you use ?????

Very well done. Great lighting, some nice acting, good job with keeping a good styleflow. Music was good, too. But the main thing that bugged me was that end shot that was held too long, and the fact that the film is not finished. But as a whole, excellent work and I aspire to create a short film with slight resemblance to this film, in that the main character is imagining an elaborate reality and at the end we see that he is mentally ill and strapped to a wheelchair. Anyhow, cheers! God bless -b

Really really intense, I enjoyed a lot diving into the atmosphere you created. Very convincing, very rich, really great short film. It's a pity you never finished it, but on the other hand, I think leaving it open makes it even more dramatic. The coma-context gets a little lost, but it is way more creepy

Ok, I am new to this site and maybe I just don't get it. But from my novice point of view, this video blew balls. What was the point? It was called HIT and it was a Huge miss. Is this like the paper bag from American Beauty or something? Cause I don't get that either.

Very well put together, especially for a first film. Nice job!

great video,
great lighting,
great acting

Nice scene composition. In fact, an excellent job. I am Brazilian and got surprised by the song in Portuguese, beaultifully sang by the singer. Great lighting, acting, composition ...
Nice job man !

Love this! We will put on our site for July/August issue! What kind of camera do you use? obviousmag.com
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this is my wife. Its our 2nd kid and she will be here in about a month.

There some realy sweet shots in it!
tobad its not in HD.. :)