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2. iPhone Spec Commercial
7 months ago
Director, Storyboard and Editing: Yannick Hagman, Copywriter: Sean Ryan,
DoP: Luke Linder, Composer: Sebastian Brunner, Voice Artist: Mark Thorpe
Special Thanks to Jacques Kieffer and Mark Thorpe

Shot on a HV20

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  • Eugenia Loli-Queru plus 7 months ago
    Very nice overall. Just a few notes:
    - Try to cut it at 30 sec, which is the normal TV ad duration (if this was the target)
    - Fade out at the end, as the smile is a bit unsettling. ;)
    - The voice over was the weakest part IMHO. I'd lose it completely...
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  • DaEMoN 7 months ago
    Wow, nice!
    I do agree with the voiceover being the weakest part.. but overall it looks reeeeeeeally nice
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  • Yannick 7 months ago
    Hello, thanks for the feedback so far. The voice or what is being said? Will make my next one 30 sec.
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