Alright, this is my third attempt at this and I think I have improved upon it. What I did is change the music to a group called Tryad and used a song called Breathe. It is on Jamendo. I love the music and feel this group of musicians is very talented. I also shortened several clips and made the cuts more sharp. Please give me feedback.

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  • Barlow Elton 4 months ago
    Nice work, Ken! It's way Way WAY better! Much tighter with the new music and the pacing is much quicker, yet smoother. You have some really nice landscapes, and I like that you still managed to show moving water and even slow motion of the hikers.

    Overall, very nice. It feels like it hit the right dramatic notes for what you were going for.

    Barlow
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