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5. Upside down

by Josh Chernoff

4 months ago

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1. High Level Studios

by Josh Chernoff

8 months ago

I'm open to all kinda of "public" critique. Please be honest and clear. If you don't like something say why. If you think I could do better say how. I encourage you all to be as clear as I am about your own level of comfort if you wish to have you work critiqued. So that way when I feel like giving my own critique on your work I know if I should.

keep learning and enjoy what you do!.

To be far I was a bit lazy when I did this. I could have spent more time working on it.

Upside down for Five Second Projects: go to greyscalegorilla.com/blog/2009/08/03/five-second-project-upside-down/ !

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Phil Hoppes 4 months ago

That's great! I like it.
Josh Chernoff 4 months ago

I did not have the time I wanted to clean it up, but I'm still happy with it.
Mariusz Ślemp 4 months ago

Hi Josh, first of all, thanks for giving critique on this blog...and im trully appreciate your help. You inspire me to make some critique as well...so i`ll try;)
Your animation looks good and fluent, but i think, that you can make it more attractive by some interaction with this guy or by putting some "illusion picture" like this: media.photobucket.com/image/graphic%20upside%20down%20escher/santosh111/FriendorFoeIllusion.gif
Thats my first impression
Josh Chernoff 4 months ago

That image is assume. I agree I should have used the character more. I have about 1.5 seconds of dead space at the end of my video.
Lisa Poje 3 months ago

HAHA! I love the character! He's very interesting. I'd like to see more in the background, something to give us a sense of where we are. Maybe factory look?

Good job!
Josh Chernoff 3 months ago

I completely agree, I was thinking of having other objects ("maybe other boxes, ect... ") that would be a part of the foreground fall with the guy so it would look as if it was not nailed down it flew up.

Thanks for the input.
Nick Campbell 3 months ago

Seems like he needs a "wily coyote" moment before he falls. Like, he looks at the camera and then realizes what is happening. That may help the timing a bit. A background would help too. ROCK!