
Marissa Nadler - Thinking of You
2 years ago
Video for the song "Thinking of You" by Marissa Nadler.
Directed by Jennifer Cox, with many thanks to Clara & Alex.
Directed by Jennifer Cox, with many thanks to Clara & Alex.
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Nice job. The shots you chose to tell your story were very convincing.
I almost wished that I saw the end of the relationship, or why she was so sad Thaat's what I was expecting.
Maybe it's better to just leave it open.
Also, I was kinda hoping for more of a reveal as to what the girl was doing/ where she was. I mean, you see the bottom half the whole time and when you amrried the top image together at the end, it seemed just a little disappointing. I dunno. She did a good job as far as her acting. I just wished the camera moved away or something reveal the whole scene.
Great job though!
A few suggestions...
1) I was loss for the first half... it seems it would have been better to edit the exact scene at about 2:33... where the character is in the bed "thinking about"... by putting this at the beginning as well... this would have tied the beginning and the end together more effectively IMHO.
2) ... this is perhaps petty suggestion... but, softening the break in the bottom half from the top half by feathering the line would seem to be more visually appealing in my minds eye.
Joe
I cuold relate to this video. I've had, as many of us have had, similar relational experiences and heart aches.
The fact that this piece was able to elicit some emotion out of me proves that you did an effective job.
Good work.
ps, I like the straight divide between the screens at the end. To me, it represented a broken or split person. it created a slight distortion over the persons face which was a great visual metaphor in my opinion.
Great work, magic work