Lotta great aspects of this vid. I dig the lighting and locations. I also enjoyed seeing all the regular people I assume are family and friends from the community.

The scene at the podium seemed a little abrupt, and the story line inside the office. I would have liked to have seen that carry more throughout the piece instead of just a little at the beginning and towards the end, unless you were just trying to foreshadow it, which I didn't really feel.

This just seems a lot more real than a lot of rap/hip hop videos I see these days. Nice work.