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This is a fair copy of the first segment of what I hope will turn into a much longer sequence of visits to some of the 'redundant' churches in the South West.

The idea and some of the style was suggested to me by Antonioni's great late short The Gaze of Michelangelo but as the church itself reminded me a little of the one Bergman uses in Winter Light and the poor light conditions left my raw footage quite grainy, I've opted to go for a high contrast black and white presentation.

The music is Thomas Tallis - Blessed are those that be undefiled.

All comments gratefully received.

The entire Lost Church material so far is collected here - vimeo.com/album/143622

For more information on the church see visitchurches.org.uk
  • David Salas 2 months ago
    This is a great location, well photographed. There are a lot of nice shots, particularly of the stained glass windows and the light cast by them. Although, I don't think any shot of the figure adds anything to the image or the tone. Editing wise; I like the jump cuts into the tapestry, but I hate the zoom out. The omission of this retreat would make the section stronger.

    All in all I think this would work better with the figure removed.
    It is he that is redundant.
  • bartleby plus 2 months ago
    Thanks for your comments, Dave.

    It's interesting because I am planning on doing a version without the figure so we'll see how that turns out, though I worry that without him all we'll be left with is a series of unconnected images. As such whilst I'm inclined to agree he adds little in terms of image or tone, he is the unifying conciousness of the piece as well as the source of much needed movement. In addition I'm hoping that as the sequence progresses the necessity of his role will become clearer.

    I'm sorry you don't like the dissolve to zoom out transition, I was rather taken with it. I'll see what it looks like without it.

    Cheers,

    b
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  • WillBeRain 2 months ago
    really touching, I like the camera's smooth movement and the points of view you choose with personal touch, besides this is really nice church. and it's really stylish black and white.
  • bartleby plus 1 month ago
    thanks WillBeRain, I'm glad you liked it. I visited another couple of churches on Thursday so hopefully will be able to post some of them soon.
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