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Scene 2 from "Maestro"
6 months ago
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13. Scene 2 from "Maestro"
6 months ago
This is the war scene from our upcoming short film. There is no color correction and the final product will be in high-def, but this is a relatively final picture cut.
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Did he become injured in this scene? If so then it is not clear how.
The pacing seems a bit slow for the dramatic feel I believe you are going for. If this is the end then some sort of editing demise needs to happen if that is what is happening to the character. slow at first to quicker cuts to show his increasing confusion and chaotic state.
Or perhaps you want a fast pace with the explosions and then slow it down to show us his close up and eventual total disconnection from war when he forces himself into this music escape.
Just some thoughts. I hope to see this color corrected. Looks good so far!
Great production value -- really well done.