NEED TO BE RESHOT:
- we might need to reshoot the scene when vern walks in… I assembled the clips I had, but the cuts look awkward? shoot me coming out of my office instead. then switch to a shot of my back (showing all the students) or a shot from above. I want to voice over that scene as much as possible.
- claire close up: "excuse me sir, I know this is detention, but…." (we have no shot of melissa)
- vern / bender: "and you will not sleep" (we have a shot but it's not clearly focused on bender and you can see the imac in the background)
- handing out papers to the class: "alright people, we're going to try something a little different today…" (can see imac in the background again and not really a good angle)
- we don't have a close up shot of jamie saying "you know, I can answer that right now sir…."
- we don't have a close up shot of bender saying "crystal" (when vern asks "is that clear mr. bender?") -- I removed that part of our movie for now
- show vernon going into his office after the lecture, before bender says "that man is a brownie hound" (but while shooting, be sure not to see the inside of the office)
- film a quick shot of me standing up and looking out my office to transition between fingernail biting and brian talking to himself about his paper
- we need a closeup shot of bender staring at brian in disgust as he talks about being a walrus
- we need a shot of both brian and bender taking off their jackets at the same time
- I cut out the "hot beef injection" part because we don't have a camera angle shot of andrew/claire while bender is talking (so we miss them turning around to say ENOUGH)
- we need to shoot a closeup of andrew saying, "why don't you just shut up, there are 4 other people in here you know." (try to have him match the tone of him saying "take piss and you're dead"….) -- I'm having a hard time transitioning between the shot of claire/andrew where andrew says "take a piss and you're dead before the first drop hits the floor" and the next scene where andrew says "why don't you just shut up".
- reshoot the back shot of me dropping off the coca cola's and then bender coming up to the table to sit. the current shot has script visible on the floor. to fix it, I had to zoom way in, which distorts the shot. reshoot the shot AND then shoot another shot of my back as I leave the scene by turning down the hallway. from there, I can cut to an existing shot we have just as bender sits down and continue the scene.
MAYBE RESHOOT:
- maybe reshoot the scene where allison catches the can of coca cola -- maybe use hung's idea of a fishing pole + line
- maybe reshoot the meat throwing scene (you can just barely see a hand throw it…)