Gracias por el comentario!!! Si se movio, pero no funcionó muy bien, pero bueno hay que seguir intentandolo.
Un saludo

Wow. Great shots. But as this is widescreen why not upload it in 1280x720 you get your deserved real HD quality!

Very very well done film. I just saw it and loved the ending. Thanks for making me a contact. I don't deserve it. :o)

Hello Jan thanks for the comment. The short film format in HDCAM tape broadcast at 1080p but hope capture and upload in HD.

Hey que bueno! me encantó la puesta de cámara y el montaje.
Saludos!

A great short superbly done! The tension within the story line along with camera work without a glitch. Good actors. Very believable and natural projection. Incredible twist within the story (I thought he was going to die but at the end I understood your intentions). Excellent soundtrack that compliments the film footage. I agree with Jan's comment regarding HD. In HD this would truly turn many heads. Congrats!

good stuff!

Espectacular fotografia.muchas gracias por compartirlo.

Esta muy bien hecho. En este negocio hay que ser perseverantes para salir victoriosos, suerte y sigue aciendo lo que te gusta.

Great storyline, clean visuals and soundtrack: excellent short Lizondo! :)
Specialy like the dollyshot from above the cage: how did you do that?
Waiting for the HD version.

Fantastic all around. I hope to see a feature film by you soon!

Brilliant, such a clever denouement. Loved the angles and lighting; a very polished short film.

Muy bueno el corto Mario!! Que haces ahora que has acabado la escuela?

Wow great job on this Lizondo. very nice shots and lighting. The ending was cool I didnt expect it to go that way

Beautiful Film Thanks for adding me as a contact!
All the best. Amine

Nice work Lizondo! Loved it man!

Lizondo, Very well done....you have worked hard on turning out a classy piece of short film. well thoughtout and realised...

Awesome!!! I love the cinematography.

Beautiful. Good job!

Nicely done. I liked the theme and the shooting of the film. It was great fun watching. Hate to say it but I figured out the end as I was watching it. Still it didn't detract from the film at all. Great job.

Qué buena fotografía, dirección y clima por dios! ;-)

Looks GREAT.

Fantastic!

good job. awesome. well done.

Wow, this looks so great! Wonderful cinematography! I am amazed.

the scene at 1:34 was astounding.

very well done.

and I actually thought I knew where it was going, yet you got me. Great job.

and i really like the light/color in the cell.

And let the God will bless you!

Gracias a todos por vuestros comentarios!!
Thanks everybody for yours comments!!!

Wooow that was fantastic! DoP in this was friggin awesome! :)

i was so surprised, and delighted to see him go 'free' as i thought he was being led to the gallows! the high fidelity music enhanced the credits outa site! well done, very well executed ;)*

Well done! Good framing and great photography!!!

Great dolly work. Did you buy, make or a hire the dolly? I'm still undecided about what to get for my dolly needs.

Genial!

Excelente cuento. Los ángulos de cámara son interesantes y la iluminación era muy buena. Me gusta la forma en que usted utiliza la iluminación dura y larga sombra. Los efectos de sonido funcionado bien, aunque usted no mostró los demás reclusos. Espero que usted puede leer esto, porque yo no speeck español y utiliza el traductor de google.

The best short I have seen on Vimeo well done great work

Saludos lizondo, muy bien grabado las tomas muy bien echas, aqui yo creo que le falto mas un contenido mas fuerte,mas intenso hacia tu personaje quisas por eso no a habido suerte en festivales, por lo que leeo en los comentarios,. siento que la historia es muy obvia y solo muestras el trayecto de su salida, dando como sorpresa el que no queria salir,.! siento que no te dice nada, mas que eso,.! pero la fotografia y facilidad de dirigir es extraodinaria con una gran historia harias algo espectacular,.!!! espero yo pronto tener la posibilidad de por lo menos hacer mi primer corto y ya lo expondre aqui para escuchar todos los comentarios,.!
felicidades.! espero ver mas cosas tuyas.

Muy bueno lizondo, sobre todo el apartado técnico y artístico.

Yo el final, no me lo esperaba, pero tampoco ha sido el "golpe de efecto" que tienen otros cortos que ganan festivales. Pero la dirección, desde luego, de 10

Por cierto, como ya te han dicho varios, mira a ver si lo puedes subir en HD...

Very professional. Well executed tracking shots and lighting that yield that confined atmosphere. Believable performances of the actors. The end is more or less predictable, but it didn't really bother.

That was brilliant. The mood and atmosphere conjured up there, fantastic, dark and sinister, tension laden. Brilliant, then the twist at the end, unexpected to a certain extent (I say this as it was one plot which ran through my mind) but interesting. The sound as well, both music and effects compliment the story and the scenes perfectly. Thank you for creating such a lovely piece of work.

good job! i waiting your next film!

Loved it, looking forward to watch this in HD...

one of the better shorts i have seen! great job in connecting with the viewer. i was asking myself what i'd do if i was suddenly turned out into the world after being in prison for so long... probably rob the nearest bank, so i could go back to free room and board...

Great work. You really accomplished superb production design and a thoughtful story within such a small amount of time. Thanks for the add!

nice vid :)

Excellent short movie,very "pro"!

Classic photography. Nice.

Oeh que chulo el vertigo shot. Muy bien Mario, me gusta.
Esa linea de 'vamos, coño' tambien añade, no se, sabor (?)
Cuanto tiempo has trabajado en esto?

De nada Mario. Asi que el proximo sera independiente, es decir sin las clases o ayuda de la escuela superior?
Bueno, Sorprendenos la proxima vez!

Me a gustado mucho ver este corto, desde luego, hay mucho talento !

highly watchable. Excellent.

C o o l !

You should have gone through with the killing of the security guard, and then released him! I liked your film very much though.

wowwwww esta buenisisismo!!!!!!, me encantan las imagenes y los movimientos de camara!!!!!!
que buenooo!!!

This was so incredibly well done. I had a sneaking suspicion in regard to the ending. I really enjoyed it.

Thanks for adding me as a contact.

Excellent short!!!

Your crew did a great job.

Nice one Lizondo - Brilliant effort - I only just discovered this. Keith.

Beautiful. Sergio Leone would be so proud of the close-ups. I must admint, I knew where it was going, but could not stop watching. I want more.

Yes! I guessed the ending, I'm so glad it ended that way. That was intense- you show crazy amounts of potential. I'm amazed by this, cheers friend!

Good Job Congratulations!!!

loved the twist, i surely thought he was going to the chair not to the big wide world.

Excellent work. Beautifully shot.

Great,though I don't understand the words...

great dolly shots and lighting! nice work!

Great directing. The ending was a perfect and very realistic twist for the lesser of two scary outcomes to the end of an inmates prison life. THis deserves some true HD. I can't wait to see your other piece. Thanks for reaching out.

Muy bueno, me ha gustado sobre todo como está montada la escena que caminan por el pasillo porque una escena así es fácil que se haga larga. Lo que no he llegado a entender es porque el guardia más mayor se queda con esa pasividad mientras está estrangulando a su compañero.

Goooooooooooood!

Wow... Excellent film! Wonderful cinematography and color-grading. That combined with the soundtrack gave it the perfect aesthetic. I loved the opening detail shots and the twist at the end.

cool film

"Green Mile"

good job.

This is truly a great piece of work....

Unas de la mejores shorts que e visto en vimeo. Muy buen trabajo hermano!

Great production value all around,up there with ayz,quality.did you shoot this on a hv30 or xha1,cant tell.

Hey, i loved the film. The message hits home in so many ways. From a spiritual stand point, this world is a prison. And after becoming so accustomed to its lifestyle of greed and selfishness, freedom in Christ becomes our worst fear. Humanity itself has lost its ability to humble themselves and put others first. Selflessness is the only characteristic that reflects God's true love... i particularly felt moved by the part when the "prisoner" attempted to strangle one of the very men who was trying to set him free; just think about how many times (when living out of the Spirit) we hurt those very people that only want to see us set free. AMAZING! Keep putting out films like this, and GOD BLESS YOU!

Estudou teatro, fez algumas peças teatrais, mas descobriu o cinema como sua profissão. Trabalhou como assistente de direção em filmes publicitários, TV e longa. Morou quatro anos no Rio, trabalhando com Regina Casé no programa “Um Pé de Quê?” dirigido por Estevão Ciavatta. Passou pelas produtoras "o2 Filmes", "Margarida Flores e Filmes" e "Mixer". Está preparando seu primeiro curta-matragem, "Fio de Nylon", junto com o dramaturgo, Marcos Ferraz. Vera Holtz e o Titã, Paulo Miklos, estão cotados para os papéis principais. Agora, começa dirigir seus primeiros trabalhos.

wow stunning!

very good looking but for me very predictible. Usually I am a friend of open endings but this one was to much. I felt like there was something missing. It concentrated to much on the prision then on the charakter problems/conflict.

impressionante!
me encanto!
espero ver mas algun dia... suerte hermano!

Excelente... muy pro... no soy de mirar mucho cortos por el hecho de que gralmente son muy experimentales o tienen muchas carencias... este me atrapo.... muy bien hecho y con un muy bueno guion
Quiero ver mas!!!!

Muy buen trabajo felicitaciones desde Perú, muy buena la foto, muy bien lograda asi como los planos, te dejo un corto que hize hace poco para que lo veas y me des tu opinion SUISIDAS es.youtube.com/watch?v=NNVKi3zvKWo , estamos en contacto

que buena fotografía!

loko vos sos tremendo para la dirección de fotografía, te doy un 100 en eso, lo único que agregaría sería la historia narrada [por detrás] antes de salir de prisión, describiendo sus pensamientos sobre el mundo real con un enfoque en lo que le impide salir [psicologicamente] de su propio mundo.. le daría un personaje intelectual por dentro, y oprimido por fuera. ..Solo una idea.

Pero muy bueno mi estimado, siga adelante!
- SRS

Great Job!!! I like the twist at the end. Great soundtrack with great camera work!!!

Brilliant little film - I really enjoyed it!

A que muchacho tan timido a la dureza de la vida real resulto este gabrielito :D

Felicidades y si que se merece una subida en 720P

Wonderful video! I just attended a panel discussion with Michael Eric Dyson, Stic.man and Kevin Powell, and MED used a phrase that really stuck with me about how prisons "castrate the future of men." This video really put more umpth to that statement. Nice work and the delivery was awesome!

nice work

good

Very well shot. Half the shots looked amazing, half the shots looked a little too video-y. Need to work a little more within the confines of video dynamic range and shot composition. The climax was projected to me about halfway through the film but it was still a great twist. The actual climax when he was released out of the front gate could have had a little more drama to it, more of a cliffhanger feel rather than just cutting to him walking through the gate, holding his bag. Overall, tremendous piece!

I like it

I loved it, I just didnt like the music to much. What camera and Lens did you use?

Wow that was really inspireing, good work.

Excellent. I totally did not expect that type of ending. I thought he was going to die. But it was worse..he had to go back into society. Great camerawork.

Beautiful. Visually stunning and a nice twist in the end. Great!

There is no such difference between the live and death.

Beautiful! It kept me guessing till the end. Thanks for the contact add Lizondo.