This is a good short though it could be better due to many technical issues.

STORY: +6
Good.

DIRECTING: +6
Good.

ACTING: +7
Some are very good, the old man and the girl while the boyfriend is a bit stiff.

CINEMATOGRAPHY/LIGHTING: +7
Camera movements and angles are very good. The lighting makes some scenes looking really really good and some aren't. I can clearly see the light stand right in the middle of the shot :-) The shot when the man was telling the girl about what happened in the past, the lighting wasn't matched but maybe it was just me!!

EDITING: +7
Very good through out except the shoot out scene, maybe it needs a faster cuts.

MUSIC: +8
Very good.

Thanks! I enjoyed it!

The 'old' man acting was just fine.
The girl needs to find a more natural delivery.... kinda wooden.
It's not a bad story and it's done well.
Ya got my vote dude..... er, 'old' man :)

The film is great... but you really need to balance out the audio.

Yes the audio was teh bad part, I had to turn up and down my speakers constantly! :P

That looks so cool Erik....