David Salas

This is a great location, well photographed. There are a lot of nice shots, particularly of the stained glass windows and the light cast by them. Although, I don't think any shot of the figure adds anything to the image or the tone. Editing wise; I like the jump cuts into the tapestry, but I hate the zoom out. The omission of this retreat would make the section stronger.

All in all I think this would work better with the figure removed.
It is he that is redundant.