• Mutcluck 9 months ago
    CALLING FOR SCRIPTS before the vote.
    2 new scripts are up in the files section to be read and considered for Obstructionist #2.

    We'd love to see other entries before we pick one in a couple weeks. Check out the files and the group forum threads.

    vimeo.com/groups/obstructionist/forums
    vimeo.com/groups/286/files


    Also... Join the group if you're interested in the first project or this second one.

    You can see the films from the first project too. Still hoping someone with do a mashup/remix of all the videos from the first challenge.

    vimeo.com/groups/obstructionist

    Obstructionist Idea thread we recently started:
    vimeo.com/groups/obstructionist/forumthread:331

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    I've had an idea ruminating for a couple years. I've always wanted to have multiple directors take a crack at a single short film. The only restriction is that the dialogue is the same in all the films, while settings, action, choice of actor/actress or swapping genders is entirely up to the director.

    With several pieces produced from one script, these films could be shown individually an then be edited together into one more experimental piece in which the through action of the script will constantly be maintained by various actor/actresses all playing the same role. I think it could be very interesting.

    Let me know if anyone is feeling this idea, and maybe we can start bouncing around short script ideas, or maybe someone reading this has a short film script ready to get this sort of treatment. We could also have one or two stylistic shots required in the film to make the transitions between films in the remix part of the project.

    So this is the outline.

    1. THE SCRIPT: Pick a 1-3 page script (strip away some of the descriptions to make it easier to have one's own interpretation.)
    2. THE COVER: Several directors shoot their version. Hopefully there will be wide differences in setting, actors, and even potentially plot (if we pick a script ambiguous enough)
    3. THE REMIX: various editors download their favorite versions and work on creating a new remix of the film. It may have it's own point of view or may be just an alternative retelling of the original story using lots of different actors/setting and version.

    Sorry bout not having videos yet. I'm new to the site and will be uploading some HD soon.

    - Mutcluck
  • Mario Niebles 2 months ago
    yet better: why not shooting in different languages, from different places around the world??! :o
  • Mutcluck 1 month ago
    Sorry for the slow reply. Mario, i'd love to see the first obstructionist in another language. We had one in French, but it wasn't from native speakers per se.
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  • SteveR 9 months ago
    This is an interesting idea. I'd be willing to have a go.
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  • Remyyy 9 months ago
    This idea is really really really great.
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  • adam deeves 9 months ago
    Great idea. I love the idea of creating a short-film standard. Why not write the script youself? Have you checked whether it has been done before?

    A similar idea could be to have just a few words like: "No" "Oh" "Ah" "Okay" for example, opening the project up to a larger number of people and interpretations (but probably making a remix a bit more difficult).
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  • Paul McClintock 9 months ago
    Brilliant idea!
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  • Adam Holwerda 9 months ago
    DO IT. Maybe I will write a script.
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  • Caroline Martin 9 months ago
    I would enjoy participating in this! Let's make it happen, please?
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  • Spatulated 9 months ago
    just like that
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  • Spatulated 9 months ago
    I am game. I personally vote a super short script, 1 page type stuff.
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  • Adam Holwerda 9 months ago
    “Dear God, Bob, what is it?!”

    “You know what it is, Martha. Don’t play games with me.”

    “It has to be the most…the…strangest…”

    “Yes, it is quite strange. But we both knew that. That’s the reason we’re here, isn’t it?”

    “Well. John is really the reason we’re here. If it hadn’t been for him, none of this would have been possible.”

    “Would your mother approve?”

    “Of course! She wanted me to have it. She left me precise instructions on how to use it just before she died. She told me that I was lucky.”

    “Well, you are. It’s yours. John made it, you know.”

    “He did?”

    “After a fashion.”
  • Adam Holwerda 9 months ago
    Sorry...these weird things came up when I tried to edit them. Plot ambiguity up the yin yang. And sorry Josh.
  • adam deeves 9 months ago
    I think this script is almost perfect. I love the ambiguity. I have a slight reservation about the first line in that it leads the rest of it into comedy. I don't think I could be totally convinced by an English actor seriously saying, "Dear God, Bob!" Without it, I think this script could be executed in any genre, any place, any time. How about dropping the main character's names altogether? I would hardly ever use a person's name if I already have their attention. For me, this seems to be a way of talking that only exists on television. I think it would be really nice if John is the only named character. It's also a great name that can be adapted to Jan, Johan, Jean, whatever language is being used.
  • 3d60 9 months ago
    yes adam this is an acute observation you have made Mr holwerda has fallen in to the the context trap.....as little context as possible leads to larger and potentially more creative ambiguity. What you say Adams?
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  • Mutcluck 9 months ago
    Wow. What a great response to my post. This community is awesome. I'm in the middle of traveling right now. Actually in Kigali Rwanda currently. The internet was down today and the network speed may not be up to the task of me doing uploads, but I can shoot some video out here too. Maybe I'll take a crack at Adam's script or someone elses if it's volunteered. Sweet addition to the thread with your script. I may take a crack at writing something too, but maybe I'll just shoot yours. I kind of agree with deeves re: dropping names from the script or making them genderless ie Alex etc.
  • Adam Holwerda 9 months ago
    Fine with me. I don't think the script should be anything rigid. Artistic liberties can be and often should be taken - names can change, not exist, dialog can be slightly altered...So. Yeah.
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  • Brown 9 months ago
    I'm up for it too,
    Have you seen The Five Obstructions? could be good for inspiration
  • Paul McClintock 9 months ago
    I have (NOW). Coincidence that I just saw it on the shelf at Borders yesterday.
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  • Casey D 9 months ago
    definitely into this.
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  • Bill 9 months ago
    me too
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  • Mutcluck 9 months ago
    How bout we pick a date to have a script in by. Maybe a week from today. Or less.

    Everyone can vote via comment on the one they want to do this with. Then the one with most votes, we use.

    It will work best if we get as many people to take on one project rather than a couple. We may want to put together a little video to introduce the concept, once we pick a script. What does everyone think about that as a gameplan?
  • adam deeves 9 months ago
    I think you should choose the script, set the rules, make the channel, and let this monster loose for generation after generation to take on! Yeah!
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  • Mutcluck 9 months ago
    Also, we may want to put some descriptions in the original script, so it reads as a coherent idea and film, with an understanding and instructions that a director should feel free to ripout and change any description or actions in the script as long as all the dialogue remains in it. One could even switch dialogue from one character to another.

    I always thought of it as the way that playwrights have taken liberties with Shakespeare to reinvent his plays.

    Without any descriptions it might feel daunting for some people/directors who don't want to truly reinvent the script and rather just make an interesting short with a couple tweaks. Without description, every director has to completely write a script, which may dissaude them from participating because of the extra effort and mindf**ck involved in the process. I think similar films (descriptions and actions being similar) would be as interesting as the films that were major departures from the original. I want to see both types of films in the process. I'd really love for this idea to work, I think it could be pretty amazing.
  • adam deeves 9 months ago
    Including details that can be changed might get confusing. I think it would be freeing rather than daunting to just present a spoken script.

    I love the idea that the dialogue isn't specific to a character. Maybe presenting the script as a paragraph would give this project many more possibilities, such as splitting it between a dozen characters or presenting it as a crazed monologue. Here's Adam Holwerda's script in this form as an example:

    Dear God, Bob, what is it?! You know what it is, Martha. Don’t play games with me. It has to be the most…the…strangest… Yes, it is quite strange. But we both knew that. That’s the reason we’re here, isn’t it? Well. John is really the reason we’re here. If it hadn’t been for him, none of this would have been possible. Would your mother approve? Of course! She wanted me to have it. She left me precise instructions on how to use it just before she died. She told me that I was lucky. Well, you are. It’s yours. John made it, you know. He did? After a fashion.
  • adam deeves 9 months ago
    Or even (and this may be taking things too far) as a sentence lacking punctuation:

    Dear God Bob what is it you know what it is Martha don’t play games with me it has to be the most the strangest yes it is quite strange but we both knew that that’s the reason we’re here isn’t it well John is really the reason we’re here if it hadn’t been for him none of this would have been possible would your mother approve of course she wanted me to have it she left me precise instructions on how to use it just before she died she told me that I was lucky well you are it’s yours John made it you know he did after a fashion.

    Then the director could make lines such as:

    John made it you know?
    He did?
    After a fashion.

    John made it you know?
    He did... after a fashion.

    John made it?
    You know he did!
    After a fashion.
  • Paul McClintock 9 months ago
    I think you're on to something there. I think freeing it up like that would definitely encourage more variety and creative expression.
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  • Mutcluck 9 months ago
    I haven't seen the 5 Obstructions. Is it on vimeo or another site?
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  • Mutcluck 9 months ago
    Sounds like a pretty amazing film. I'm going to have to check it out. I loved Von Triers "The Idiots". I think there's always more ideas to explore since the French New Wave and Dogma 95. It seems like its similar to the above idea. Hoping the online Remix is a way to do something more along the lines of this new generation and taking it one step further. Either or, I'm excited by what we can do with this here on vimeo.
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  • Paul McClintock 9 months ago
    I think Vimeo is the perfect place to explore the obstruction technique. I'm going to try to submit a script for this project... it's just a matter of finding spare time to do it.
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  • Paul McClintock 9 months ago
    Alright... I'm making a channel for this purpose...!

    ...wait maybe someone else should make a channel. I'm too unreliable.
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  • Patrick Kirk 9 months ago
    Count me in as well. The suggested script looks like a lot of fun. But whatever is eventaully chosen, how about setting some dates and times to have a script selected, each persons version shot/uploaded, etc? Nothing stringent or immeadiate, mind you, but just something to make certain everyone gets going and those of us that are constantly busy know when to wedge it into our schedule.
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  • Bedtime Champ 9 months ago
    I'm in.
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  • Cineplastix 9 months ago
    I'll give this a go too once the script is in! Sounds great.
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  • Obar 9 months ago
    id consider trying
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  • Chad J. Carbone 9 months ago
    I would be interested in this experiment.
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  • 3d60 9 months ago
    I'm in ...bring it on..
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  • Mutcluck 9 months ago
    Wow. Awesome. Paul, are you up for making the channel? I just got my first video up on vimeo. i'm super stoaked. Even out here in Africa with barely any bandwidth, it eventually worked. Best to have someone who really knows vimeo to run the channel. i'm still a bit of a newby.

    Let's set these dates: My thoughts below. What are yours?

    Script due. one week?
    Voting over. one week? maybe less.
    Finished Covers. 3-4 weeks?
    Remixes begin/end. 3-4 weeks?

    Although remixes can be forever really, but a due date will get a couple flowing which will be good for the overall project and general experiment.

    Per Adam's thoughts, maybe each script can be broken into two forms. The full unambigous script with descriptions and character names and the paragraph without punctuation for the most creative types.

    While I think the ambiguous script is more creative and will lead to the most variation, I also like the possible remixes available when directors also follow a consistent through line. These films could be edited together seemlessly. It also might be extremely exciting.

    What does everyone think?

    Oh yeah, Directors should upload 2 versions of their "Covers" one with soundtrack and one without to help the editors in the remix phase.
  • Paul McClintock 9 months ago
    I think I'll be able to pull it off... as long as no one expects too much. Hah. I have to install my new adsl connection at my apartment... Finally I'll be able to waste time on vimeo at home instead of work!
  • Paul McClintock 9 months ago
    I was thinking this could be an ongoing thing... with each project placing different restrictions on the films... as the first being everyone uses the same dialogue... there could be other ways of manipulating the filmmaking process... anyway... channel url here:

    vimeo.com/obstructionist

    -- there's nothing there yet. I'll update it tonight.
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  • Mutcluck 9 months ago
    That's a great idea Paul. Very cool. So what does everyone think of the timeline I threw out for the first project?

    Also what's a catchy name for the first project that explaiins it in a word or two. Don't think my title is that eye catching.
  • Paul McClintock 9 months ago
    'One Script, Multiple Films' seems good. In my opinion. Unless someone else can think of a better name
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  • Mutcluck 9 months ago
    I love the channel page. Great work Paul.
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  • Paul McClintock 9 months ago
    It's pretty much set up now. I'm going to bed. Anyone that wishes to participate, there is now a forum at the channel page: vimeo.com/obstructionist/forum:1590

    And I've created a logo for it. If anyone wants to make another one, feel free. I think the file upload feature of the channel will help a lot with sharing scripts and whatnot.

    And once due dates have been decided I guess we can add a calendar thing that let's people know... or something. Anyway... I sleep now.

    Yay!
  • Ben Millett 9 months ago
    wait, are you the lost skeleton of Cadavra? Only he can say "i sleep now."
  • Paul McClintock 9 months ago
    Haaha. Awesome film! Awesome... yet shit.
  • Joel Curran 9 months ago
    That film is awesome!
    I hate you! You...boney...idiot.
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  • Jonathan Marcus 9 months ago
    Wow. This project is really exciting. Let me know if there is anything special Vimeo can do to support it. I am going to subscribe to the Channel.
  • Paul McClintock 9 months ago
    Awesome! I'm glad it's caught your eye.
  • Paul McClintock 9 months ago
    Actually Jonathan,

    I made a feature request which related to this project specifically. (http://www.vimeo.com/forums/topic:3462)

    I think it would increase the interactivity of channels for projects like this.
  • Jonathan Marcus 9 months ago
    OK. We will discuss this week.
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  • Paul McClintock 9 months ago
    Promo video / callout for scripts is done.
    vimeo.com/390985

    I'd like to know what you think.
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  • Patrick Kirk 9 months ago
    Well done, sir. I can't wait for a script to be selected so we can start shooting.
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  • Paul McClintock 9 months ago
    okay... rules are up:

    vimeo.com/obstructionist
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  • Paul McClintock 9 months ago
    Okay, so December 1st (Melbourne time - not sure what day that is in other parts of the world, but it's my Saturday.) is the deadline to get them in by - please email your script to the.obstructionists@gmail.com

    On December 1st I'll go through them all and then I'll make them available for all to download from the channel page.
    Then we'll hold a vote to see which is the most popular - this will probably also go by email.

    So get going. I can't wait to read them.
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  • djp 9 months ago
    paul, get Kris allison onto this job.

    i'm in.
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  • David Hinds 9 months ago
    I would love to do this sort of thing, if you dont mind one being an ameteur production with kids who cant act.

    i actually think it would make an interesting take on it..
  • Paul McClintock 9 months ago
    You're totally welcome to join in. As far as I know we're all amateurs here.
  • Obar 9 months ago
    im definitely a professional... definitely
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  • Paul McClintock 9 months ago
    This is just a reminder that the deadline for scripts is closing in! If you want to submit one please email it to: the.obstructionists@gmail.com
    December 1st is the official deadline for scripts, and I'd hate to have to extend the deadline due to lack of submissions, because that would make me look really lame!
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  • Paul McClintock 9 months ago
    ... speaking of lame

    There hasn't been a stampede of scripts, so if you're holding off just to impress me at the last minute you need to be quick. I'll wait until the end of today and post up the option(s*) before I retire for the evening.

    *"Options" assumes there is more than one to choose from. If that is not the case, I will simply post the script and people can get started on their films.
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  • Paul McClintock 9 months ago
    One submission!

    I'd say holding a vote would be a waste of time... so Adam Deeves' script wins! Thankyou Adam for taking pity on me and submitting something.

    Adam provided the script in 3 formats, all of which are in the text file. It's up to you which version you use - so long as the words remain intact.

    Everyone go download it and start making your films, it's in the files section of the channel.
  • Paul McClintock 9 months ago
    If anyone has any questions, feel free to ask.
  • Ben Millett 9 months ago
    Congrats Adam Deeve for providing the winning script. ...off to get it.
  • Ben Millett 9 months ago
    Question. Do you care which version of the script we use? So we can add the punctuation, etc., ourselves in the punctuation-less version?
  • Paul McClintock 9 months ago
    You can use any of the variations... that's why it's been provided in such a way. Only the words matter... you can play with them to create whatever meaning you wish and yes punctuation and even which character is speaking the words is entirely up to you... you could even - and this is just off the top of my head - assign some or all of the words to a narrator, or not even have them spoken at all, but instead appear as text.
  • adam deeves 8 months ago
    Hello, I've not been around for a while, so this is a nice surprise! Now I can add to my CV that I've written the script for X number of short films!
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  • Mutcluck 9 months ago
    I'm re-interpreting the script as we speak with my own punctuation and take. Splitting it into 4 or 5 scenes I think. I'm going to shoot different sections throughout Southern Africa. Saw photos of a ghost town half covered in sand in Namibia from a fellow traveler. It'll definitely be one location on the shoot.

    Also might additionally do a less cohesive piece where I get random people we meet on our travels to deliver a single line of the script. Might end up kind of fun.

    Hoping everyone else is busy brainstorming and getting ready for a shoot. I'm really looking forward to the diversity of approaches and eventually the remixes that they'll inspire.
  • Paul McClintock 9 months ago
    That sounds so awesome. Mine will most likely be some streets around near my house or even in my house. I'm not so adventurous. I wish when I was traveling I had some film in mind and the forethought to film bits of it whenever I found myself in a spectacular surrounding. Next time I go overseas, I'll certainly try it out.
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  • Mark Preston 9 months ago
    This is a truly great idea.
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  • Obar 9 months ago
    thats a very "blair witch project" script

    sweet

    i wish i had friends that would do this with me...
  • Paul McClintock 8 months ago
    The good thing about this script is that it can be a Blair Witchey thing if that's what you see in it, and something else entirely depending on how you look at it.

    My view of it is completely different. Hopefully we'll get a lot of really different films!
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  • Mutcluck 9 months ago
    I'm sure you could pull it off with just you and a tripod. Or something abstract with subtitles. Hey puppets and army men are always an option. I'd love to see that. The weirder the better.

    Anything goes as long as the words remain!
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  • Paul McClintock 8 months ago
    I've been brainstorming, and I think I've come up with a really good idea... of course, that idea is a secret, but I just thought I'd let you guys know.

    Now, all I need is a camera and some people willing to stand in front of it. Ha! Off I go to find them!
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  • adam deeves 8 months ago
    I've just discovered that my script was chosen by default. How funny. If it's any help to anyone, I tried to word it so that although there is reference to a journey, it's vague enough that it needn't be a physical one. I can't wait to see the first entry and eventually an alternative script!
  • Paul McClintock 8 months ago
    Just because it was chosen by default doesn't mean it's not perfect for the project. You put a story in my head, and now I'm obsessed with it.
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  • 3d60 8 months ago
    yhea!
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  • Mutcluck 8 months ago
    I finished the one scene in the Namibian Ghost mining town two days ago. There are some really amazing visuals due to the scenery. Hopefully it cuts together okay. The two of us traveling where the actors, directors, and cameramen on the shoot and since we're on the move everyday we didn't review the footage. Hopefully it works, but wasn't an ideal shoot for that reason. Only 3 more mini-scenes to wrap the film.

    Definitely doing a desert scene tomorrow or the next day. Hopefully my "reworking" of the script will make sense in the final cut, but now I'm working backwards from the ghost town scene since it'll end the film. May have to rethink what I originally planned for since we made a last minute large change to the plot/action at the ghost town.

    When's the deadline again? I'd love to hear about other people's progress or even read the reworkings of anyone's scripts with new punctuation, rearranging, and descriptions of actions and locations etc if anyone wants to share.
  • Paul McClintock 8 months ago
    The deadline is like 14th of January before we move onto the remixing stage... I'm happy to have people continue making them forever though.
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  • SteveR 8 months ago
    It looks like I'm the first to upload one:
    vimeo.com/441748
  • Bill 8 months ago
    I think you need a new page or base for the videos for this project.....there are too many posts!
  • Paul McClintock 8 months ago
    Bill, I have a forum on the obstructionist channel page. But no one seems to be using it.
    vimeo.com/obstructionist/forum:1590
  • Paul McClintock 8 months ago
    Shower SteveR with praise at this forum topic dedicated to his first obstruction:
    vimeo.com/obstructionist/forumtopic:181
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  • Mutcluck 8 months ago
    You rock Steve. I just watched the film. Marmite meets the French New Wave. That was great. Gotta try some of that wonderful spread when I head through London in January.
  • Bill 8 months ago
    Dont do it! Its life altering. (Marmite....not London)
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  • Mutcluck 8 months ago
    Thanks for the advice, I think I'm still going to try the Marmite. Happy New Year everyone.

    My film is in the can/on tape. It's going to be a little bit confusing though. No exact plot and the way I moved around the dialogue and timeline might be confusing but the ghost town looks great.

    Unfortunately I got robbed in Oshakati, Namibia and lost all my HD footage from the film, my HV20, and my shotgun mic. I'm bummed, but the film wasn't ruined. It was mostly additional coverage since my friend Pedro brought his Panasonic AGDVX 100A which looked better.

    We used it as the primary camera even though its not HD. I should have the final cut up on the site by January 15th. Hopefully I can't get the editing done in Kigali.

    I may also upload a "loose" cut afterward which has extra footage around the edits so it give the editors some flexibility if they want to use any of it in the remix. Also might include some B roll/alternate takes for everyone.

    Can't wait to see what other people are up to.
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  • mitch phillips 8 months ago
    I'm new to vimeo and a little confused. I can only upload my videos to a channel that I moderate, so how would I upload a video to this channel?
  • Javed Ahmed 8 months ago
    You post a link to your video either onto a forum or a private message to the moderator, and they will do that for you. Glad to be help. Happy New Year.
  • mitch phillips 8 months ago
    hey thanks, you too
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  • Mutcluck 7 months ago
    How are the projects going? I'm wrapping up my rough cut currently. Definitely need to spend some more time fine tuning and dealing with some poor audio. Since my B camera was stolen along with the tapes, I lost half my audio and half the angles. It's looking pretty though.
  • ed 7 months ago
    I'm going to shoot the video for mine this weekend.
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  • Paul McClintock 7 months ago
    I think this Sunday is a good time for people to aim to get their films up. We won't be too strict about it, but we will be castrating anyone who doesn't make the deadline. Bwahahaaahaa!
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  • Mutcluck 7 months ago
    Finally I posted my version. Its up on the channel now. vimeo.com/obstructionist
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  • Paul McClintock 7 months ago
    Everyone... Don't worry about the deadline - really it was set just to encourage people to do it. If you're still working on your films we won't actually be stopping anyone from posting them... bleh.
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  • ed 7 months ago
    Here's mine: vimeo.com/651591
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  • Illustrated Sandwich 7 months ago
    hey i am brand spankin new to vimeo- i would love to play-- it's late in the process but i think i can catch up-- could you direct me to the script (i didn't see anyones peices yet so i will be fresh on the approach) thanks yous guys!!
  • Paul McClintock 7 months ago
    vimeo.com/obstructionist

    There is a link to the script on the top right, in the 'files' section, next to a big 'TXT' button.
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  • Mutcluck 6 months ago
    Any Obstructionist films in the works? Maybe we should start a new thread and come up with a second obstructionist challenge or a second short script to work from. I'd love to do the opposite of the first. Aim for specificity in the script rather than ambiguity. What do you all think?
  • ed 6 months ago
    I'm game, but not a script writer.
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