Bloom's challenges 1: An object

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Canon 550D
50mm 1.8 ef
28 -80 mm 3.5-5.6 ef

Motion graphics
Cinematography

I think my sensor needs cleaning also.

"groping for prozac" by Ostomy (freemusicarchive.org/music/Ostomy/Volume_I/groping_for_prozac)

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