creative expression

This is some old footage I found while cleaning up my hard disk.
It was shot last year on a Nokia N96
It's edited on iMovie.
It's like a sketch, practicing a bit plus I took the challenge to make it for the "10 seconds film" group.. made it to 17s.

I wanted to give that jump cut feel, from one frame to the other... not exactly how I pictured it, I might be missing something...
Thought I'd share and take some advice.

The last notes are from Yohosame Cameron's "Asilah"

j vimeo.com/12666532

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