1 year ago

Derek Lawrey commented on High School Criminal - Nokia Short Film Concept 2011 by Sammy Ijaz

Thanks for sharing this Sammy. Your audio was clean and your lighting was great! Yes, more cuts! Shorten your pitch into as few words as possible. Make this fast and cinematic! Vary the cuts and angle of shots as stated above. Show your skills off as

1 year ago

SNKFilms commented on High School Criminal - Nokia Short Film Concept 2011 by Sammy Ijaz

Hi Sammy, Got your message about your pitch. What i'd suggest is getting into the pitch very quickly rather than taking your time explaining al the finer details. I'd go for a more punchy approach, but that's just me. You have a good presence for the cam

1 year ago

Sammy Ijaz commented on High School Criminal - Nokia Short Film Concept 2011 by Sammy Ijaz

Hey Nat, Thanks for the feedback. I will definitely work on making the different cuts. I haven't yet drawn up storyboards for the actual script, but I will. Let's keep in touch and thank you once again for the feedback.

1 year ago

Sammy Ijaz commented on Pictures of a Broken Life by Gabrielle Lewis

I <3 it :)

1 year ago

Natalie Suthons commented on High School Criminal - Nokia Short Film Concept 2011 by Sammy Ijaz

Hey Sammy, thank you for sending me your pitch! I really agree with what Dailey said above. You have very strong presentation skills, on screen presence and a nice smooth voice to carry the viewer through :) The only changes I would make are different cut