Edan Mackenzie

Incredible work here man, really enjoyed this. The editing and camerawork was superbly done. I'm also super jealous that you're able to run SL so smoothly lol - the visuals were very crisp and the animations were not glitchy in the slightest (the first time I've seen that in an SL movie). I also really loved the occasional depth-of-field effects you used and the transitions were excellent. Really nice music too that fitted perfectly. Nice to see Sydney Poma in there especially :P

Like Stvn said, for an outsider the story is a little hard to pick up at first - not because it's complex but because there are a lot of little distracting features in the transitions, etc (for example, getting changed in the middle of trying to escape the bot seemed to distract from the story because it didn't make sense). I think there were some effects that looked really pretty but for me didn't have any real purpose and were actually a bit confusing in the context of the film. It was maybe just the fact that they were used in the middle of what were very tightly edited sections of dialogue, etc (for me the dialogue seemed rushed in places and needed more pauses for dramatic effect but that's more personal taste than anything).

Overall this was a very artistically appealing film that had a great story, superb acting and by far the best camerawork I've ever seen in an SL movie, but for me needed more time to breathe, let the action soak in and allow the viewer to keep up with the story. However, like I said that's probably just me as I'm a big fan of slow-paced films. Regardless, this was a superb accomplishment and I was honoured to be a part. Great job :)

***** - 5 stars