Before you critique this video, I have a disclaimer: yes, the last clip of Nancy is out of focus. We had finished the interview and as I was tearing down the gear, she remembered a story about the bathhouse down the street. I told her to sit back down and because I thought she was in the same location as when I had started shooting, I didn't re-focus. Well, she wasn't so she is out of focus in the last clip. I know it. I'm upset. No need to critique that. I would (maybe will be able to?) have re-shot had I been there longer. I would love your thoughts. What's missing? What do you wish I had included? What can you do without? Thanks in advance!