General notes here were to simplify details and then to add a bit more design to the overall shape of the plume, so it is not so "straight funnel" shaped. In addition, as the lines would become simplified, there would be an element of shading and contrast, so to track forms and not lines. It was overall met with success. Recieved an A-.

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