Despite being already in animation we keep screening our reels to get feedback on clarity and where we could still improve things.
This is the adjusted version of the "Falling in Love" beat that shows what we changed. First we shortened the length of how long it takes for the camera to pan over to Red. This way the audience doesn't start to wonder if there is something more than just a chance encounter. The second thing we changed was that we added another shot on Blue to spend more time showing his falling in love with Red. This way we have one full shot that is just about seeing Red the way Blue sees her.