My feedback after my last rough cut:
"Well done on your animatic, I quite like the symbolic use of photographs of graffiti and 'the street' as means to discuss the issues you raise. However, I'm not such a big fan of the Ken Burns style transitions.
Maybe consider changing the tempo of the edit and the music for example graffiti has a strong link to hip-hop music or how about including sound that you record/ed at the locations as atoms."
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